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| jin b. 2008-07-29 ch 4, anon. | abuseGAAHH!! this. ish. AWESOMEE~ I was just watching Kino no Tabi and then felt like I wanted to read so then I searched for some fanfics and..THISS! I love how you described Hermes..it'd be so cool if this really happened.. |
| heartXofXice 2008-06-28 ch 4,  | abuseits been a while since i read a very fascinating story like yours, so please bear with the nice and not so nice comments first of, i like the pairing. though i felt wierd reading the love making scene with the discription of motor still inside of him. anyway, it made the story more realistic even with the spice of magic. 50k for that. second, i dont mean to sound like a now-it-all nerd but kino's journey is more of a cosmological story, of world and its being. everytime im deep in thought, i watch recorded episodes and it somehow gives me philosophical ideas. sorry to say but you somehow took away the essence of the anime, at least for me. specially with the narrow array of thoughts from kino and hermes. i still appriciate the witty remarks though. but thats all about the down side of this story, but i have to take a way a few golds from you. lastly, despite the quick paradime shifts, you didn't take away the characters' individual traits. infact, i completely suggested very realistic emotions, the kind we would likely expect from hermes and kino. besides, every anime has its cast with only specific roles, not the ones like behind the scene. a thousand gold for this. im a kino lover. i love her strangely it may seem, and you aroused that strangeness even further, specially with the stream and hot spring scene. and to note, you didnt you high-faluting words (sorry for the spelling) anyway, i like your story, very much, and i like you already for a writter. please make some more, and ill be adding you to my list. good luck |
| Daisuke1991 2008-05-31 ch 4, | abuseThe Hot Springs scene felt kind of quick but maybe it's because I wanted the story to keep moving :) anyway I liked the concept of kino choosing what he wanted to be and of course the conclusion to choose a verhicle to ride lol You writting is excelent supported by lots of details and emotion I can tell you put a lot of work into and I'm glad I had the chance to experience it.once again A great story |
| Daisuke1991 2008-05-31 ch 3, | abuseI know how you feel after writting a story I want to know if they are in love and inspried with it as i was in writting it And yeah this story rocks |
| Daisuke1991 2008-05-31 ch 2, | abuseVery strange ... I'm hooked now |
| Daisuke1991 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abuseJust read the first chapter and i'm loving it ONWARD TO THE FUTURE ... or the next chapter is good too |
| strife-lover 2008-05-18 ch 4, | abuseGeez, that's a really good story. Very well written and not too much detail at the part that didn't need it, haha. If only Hermes really was human... |
| strife-lover 2008-05-18 ch 2, | abuseMY GOSH! That ending part was just so adorable! CUTE!! |
| Tsunade-Hime13 2008-04-08 ch 4, | abuse=3 so cyute. |
| isimplylovett 2008-03-25 ch 4, | abuseI like this story's unique take on the relationship between Kino and Hermes. I think there should be more stories like this out there, but then again I do think you've got it down. I like it, I like you, and I like chocolate. |
| The JohhnyMcKilt Production... 2008-02-19 ch 4, | abuseAww :3 My imagining efforts have gone overboard > |
| Kidalana 2008-02-17 ch 4, | abuseThat was surprising... I find it highly amusing that Kino was teaching Hermes how to steer. For some bizarre reason. |
| Too lazy to sign in 2008-02-10 ch 3, anon. | abuseI'm really enjoying this! Please, update soon! MOAR PLZ |
| Kidalana 2008-01-10 ch 3, | abuseOhs! That was adorable. ^^ Nothing is seeming rushed and characters are progressing through out the story at an even pace, it makes me happy. :D Thanks for the new chapter (even though I'm late...). |
| The JohhnyMcKilt Production... 2008-01-08 ch 3, | abuseOh wow...the way you do KnT should be broadcasted to a wider audience because it is amazing! Great plot! I can't wait to see the next chapter. :D |