that was lovely, thank you, i love this anime and i think this story fit very well. altho kino was more emotional than in the anime i thought it helped with the story line

Sorry, I'm too lazy to log in. =p This is FirstTry though, and I'll be adding this to my favorites as soon as I log on. =) I like it, keep it up!

This story made me so happy as a Hermes fangirl. ^^ *squeals in happiness* It was great, you did a great great job. =P You should make a continuation story of what its like with them traveling together.

That was simply amazing! I truly loved your story. It was so spellbinding and enchanting! It's really nice to see Kino and Hermes like this, and so in love and happy together.
Magnificent job!

This was an enjoyable story. I'm only disappointed that it was so short, but the quality made up for it!

...Aw, that was so CUTE! The way you described Hermes was absolutely perfect and finally, Kino got some girl in her. Really a lovely piece of work. You should do a sequel :]

GAAHH!!
this.
ish.
AWESOMEE~


I was just watching Kino no Tabi and then felt like I wanted to read so then I searched for some fanfics and..THISS!

I love how you described Hermes..it'd be so cool if this really happened..

its been a while since i read a very fascinating story like yours, so please bear with the nice and not so nice comments

first of, i like the pairing. though i felt wierd reading the love making scene with the discription of motor still inside of him. anyway, it made the story more realistic even with the spice of magic. 50k for that.

second, i dont mean to sound like a now-it-all nerd but kino's journey is more of a cosmological story, of world and its being. everytime im deep in thought, i watch recorded episodes and it somehow gives me philosophical ideas. sorry to say but you somehow took away the essence of the anime, at least for me. specially with the narrow array of thoughts from kino and hermes. i still appriciate the witty remarks though. but thats all about the down side of this story, but i have to take a way a few golds from you.

lastly, despite the quick paradime shifts, you didn't take away the characters' individual traits. infact, i completely suggested very realistic emotions, the kind we would likely expect from hermes and kino. besides, every anime has its cast with only specific roles, not the ones like behind the scene. a thousand gold for this.

im a kino lover. i love her strangely it may seem, and you aroused that strangeness even further, specially with the stream and hot spring scene. and to note, you didnt you high-faluting words (sorry for the spelling)

anyway, i like your story, very much, and i like you already for a writter. please make some more, and ill be adding you to my list. good luck

The Hot Springs scene felt kind of quick but maybe it's because I wanted the story to keep moving :)

anyway I liked the concept of kino choosing what he wanted to be and of course the conclusion to choose a verhicle to ride lol

You writting is excelent supported by lots of details and emotion I can tell you put a lot of work into and I'm glad I had the chance to experience it.once again A great story

I know how you feel after writting a story I want to know if they are in love and inspried with it as i was in writting it


And yeah this story rocks

Very strange ... I'm hooked now

Just read the first chapter and i'm loving it

ONWARD TO THE FUTURE ... or the next chapter is good too

Geez, that's a really good story. Very well written and not too much detail at the part that didn't need it, haha. If only Hermes really was human...

MY GOSH! That ending part was just so adorable! CUTE!!

=3 so cyute.