Lovely drabble. The last line's especially poignant. Funnily enough, even though he killed her, this is far better and more believable Sweenett than ones where they get a happy(ish) ending.

I found this to be wonderful and deep. Screw anyone who says differently! ^^ Kudos to you and your lovely writing.

Okay, just one thing to say.
What the hell? This isn't a fanfiction. This is an excerpt. Except there's nothing it's excerpted from.

Keep Dreamin'!
Sweet Nightmare

Usually fics this short drive me crazy. But this was pure excellence. Very chilling.

Ooh. Heavy.

Wow. this is sick and twisted and absolutely great! I love the last line.