 vanilfrappe 12/28/07 . chapter 1 Beautiful story! I thought you captured the romance and feelings between them wonderfully. I especially liked the fact you didn't make Sesshomaru's words towards her cheesy. In fact, he was quite himself to the core, with just a hint of tenderness I enjoyed. Neat thought on Jaken.I think its more about the power sesshoamru could give him, but interesting point of view! You have a wonderful writers voice. thanks. |