love the story man plz make more to it plz i want to know what is going to happen next man it so intense i like how you got kazuya acting in here he so cool man cant forget about jin he is cool to man plz make more thank you)

this sounds stupid but that was quite funny to me

PLEASE PLEASE continue...this story...I beg, oh, I really am begging.

Goodness, this story was wonderful! Finally, a Tekken author with some actual talent! You're probably not gonna continue this story, since it hasn't been updated in awhile, but i'd just like to say that this story is a true rarity in Tekken fics: it's actually good. You stayed true to the characters AND included a very involving plot. I hope you continue writing for Tekken. :0)

I luv it! JinxLing the best couple in tekken! You can tell I really LUV this couple by my e-mail name.

i luv your story

can't wait to see what happens next

love peace hair grease
i'm outty '_'

I like that Story but I don't like Ling Jin I 'm really ...no I am a Julia and Jin type of girl my name give it away don't you think. I LOVE your story though.

Oooh! Jin/Xiouyu luv! Wheeeeeee! :bounces off the walls in excitment::

i hope this keeps going int oa jin/ling ficcy n he savalges something w his father cant wait :D

What can I say that i haven't said already? Keep Going!

This is a really good story! I can't wait for later chapters! Your portrayal of Jin is perfect: from his hatred torwards the Mishima's and his loneliness from the loss of his mother. Keep up the good work!

CANT WAIT FOR MORE :D

This is getting good. I can't wait until Ling finds out who Jin really is.

I like it a lot so 're a really good author. I'm working on a story similar to this. Pweez keep going til' the end of the tournament.

hello! I read the fic; it's good. i should write one 2 but i have no clue what to write about. ok that's all; later