 Mirthless Laughter 2009-09-22 . chapter 1haha, that's awesome. (= |
 noukinav018 2008-10-29 . chapter 1¿? uhm o well but this doesn't make sense if he already knew to drive the time machine lol
haha grounded for the car incident ... poor Wilbur |
 Link Fangirl01 2008-07-20 . chapter 1hehehe, poor Wilbur. I think that's what would happen if I ever drove. -doesn't wanna drive- I think Wilbur would be a good driver, he drives the time machine so well.
good oneshot anyway. :) |
 AudacesFortunaJuvat 2008-05-18 . chapter 1Good, but, um...why is it on there twice??
~Fortuna |
 keep-me-posted 2008-04-20 . chapter 1Whoa, I was like...deja vue, (sp?) lol. Honest mistake, though! This story is cool. But, how come Wilbur can't drive? He could drive the time machine easily. Maybe it's just the jitters that he may get a driver's license soon, lol. |
 Netbug009 2008-01-06 . chapter 1Do they even have hover cares anymore? I mean, yes the time machine, but isn't the rest bubble travel? Oh, forget it. For the sake of your fic, I shall suspend disbelief. An AU if you will. XD
This is cute, and it made me chuckle a little on the inside. It was well paced and in character. You put the story down twist though. You may wanna fix that. Good job otherwise. |
 Alisi Thorndyke 2007-12-30 . chapter 1Wilbur is getting his first driving lesson? You would think he would know how to drive a hover car since he drove the time machine with no problem. :) He wasn't suppose to look at it let alone drive it lol.
Alisi T. :) |
 NobleBrokenBeauty 2007-12-27 . chapter 1I loved it! You had me laughing all the way through. :D Great job!
NBB |
 doodlegirll 2007-12-27 . chapter 1I liked this! It was totally funny, though you wouldn't think Wilbur'd have too much of a problem since he could drive the time machine...
Oh, and somehow, this got doubled. The story's here twice...
Anywho, nicely done!
~Robi |