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kmr04
2009-05-17 . chapter 3
I don't know if you still come here to read or post, but I just wanted you to know that I thought this story has a great chance. I know I should not have bothered to read it as you stated that you were dropping it but the description got the better of me. I am hopping that as it has been some time you might consider working on it again or even trying one more time with the same idea in mind. I would really love to see how this would have unfolded. Thank you
dramacrazed101
2008-04-05 . chapter 3
Not fair,I need more of this story.
HPHGKCroar
2008-01-25 . chapter 3
i am totally enamored with your story and your portrayal of both derek and casey!
UPDATE SOON PLEASE
argentenipinkini
2008-01-05 . chapter 3
aw.
and i realize that i didn't mention this in the last review, but, por casey! derek will make it better...
argentenipinkini
2008-01-05 . chapter 2
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whoo, derek called her and wants her to go his hockey game. cute.
argentenipinkini
2008-01-05 . chapter 1
ooh, yay! interesting. mysterious...sort of, lol.
princetongirl
2007-12-31 . chapter 3
loved it update soon
Narya100
2007-12-29 . chapter 3
I like the changes
crescent_mo0n19
2007-12-28 . chapter 3
I know what it was that had Derek not talking to her! :3 or at least I think I do. Anyway, I'm going to assume that no one back home knows about what happened at the party, although Derek is perceptive and noticed that something's off. Edwin and his girlfriend are cute, and vaguelymature!Derek is so much fun to read. I'm liking Tiffany right now despite myself (I don't want to like her since she breaks poor Sam's heart) and I definitely can't wait for more! update soon?
crescent_mo0n19
2007-12-28 . chapter 2
Yay! Background story! I'm a little bit confused about why Casey wants to move, but I think I get it. At any rate, it's nice to see that Casey and Derek are friends now. =] By the way, you wrote "Don't hit a dear" but I'm assuming you meant "deer"... unless Derek was telling Casey not to hit someone who one cares for. XP Next chapter time!
crescent_mo0n19
2007-12-28 . chapter 1
In an effort to encourage you to update often / soon, I'll review every chapter. :3 I'm doing this because I think this story has a LOT of potential... and it's grammatically correct (which is a huge plus in my book)! I didn't read this before you decided to repost it so I don't know what's going to happen but I guess I'll see? At any rate, this chapter made me squeal at how cute they are. XP
PurpleFreak7410
2007-12-28 . chapter 3
wow I really like our story...keep updating :):)
MaybeBaby27
2007-12-27 . chapter 3
I'm glad you posted this again! I really liked this story before and with the 'prologue' of sorts added to the beginning I like it even more.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
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