Hrm. If you want, I'd be willing to beta this for you as well, though you may want to rewrite the first chapter. I know for certain that Kimahri would like that (trying to be subtle about spelling his name wrong).

It's not too bad of a fic, I'd say it's definitely worth continuation. Also, while I'm not really into Harry Potter fics, (regarding "Valiance and Cowardice the noun form of "valiant" is "valor", not "valiance". Just letting you know.

Awesome stuff, though Auron did talk a little too much.

I wasn't quite sure where this was going, but it's a damnsight better than most Auron-related fic, including mine.

Auron says almost everything without saying anything at all, and if you're going to write Aurikku, having the clever Al Bhed serve as translator is a good trope!

I love it! n _ n

Shoot...I guess I should log in now...heh

Hey there I'm 'too lazy to log in'! So would

there be any chance of you continuing this?(

Very nice, though I found the conversation a tad bit dull. I would love to see a countinuation, but try to add some chapter length. While it did play on perspective well, it seemed a little cheesy, but it is nice to see an Aurrikku where they don't just proclaim their love for each other and then it ends. Please don't stop writing.

Humbly a reviewer,-Text-wolf

Wow, that's pretty awesome. :D I love the idea that they understand each other without speaking. That could be quite romantic, I think. Well written a little short for me, but I guess that's just because I wanted more. I think you've got the characterization down, and I loved Tidus's line. XD Nice. I'd like to see more. I'm interested to see what would happen. Keep it up. :D

Fwe

Rikku and Auron, talking without talking...I like the idea. It's neat to see how people interpret each other, and how accurate those interpretations are...I can see Rikku and Auron being very perceptive of each other, trying to understand how the other worked.

Anyway, this is well written, with everyone in character and good description...I'd definitely like to see some more!

Interesting, a good beginning I like it. You should continue with this.

Hm... This looks promising. There is some sort of charm in "understand each other without words" type relationships. If you'll be able to catch that charm and use it, this can become a great story.
P.S. I'm hoping that there will be a happy ending o