Actually I didnt think Fran seemed OOC to be honest. I still felt it was Fran-I think you wrote the whole oneshot really well!! And it was both sad but happy. Of course since Im more of a Balthier/Vaan fan, I thought it was sweet all the parts with Vaan in it, but I felt really sad for Fran. I love her too ;_; nice job though --you did good with the lyrics!! ::thumbs up:: I hope you continue writing!!