Short, but very well written! I really enjoyed reading this. :D

That must have been quite a show. The princess and the Tin Man spinning in the air.

This was cute, I really liked it!

After reading the review reply to your other story, I quickly went to check if you wrote more Tin Man fic. I was really glad to find this. I do hope you write more stories. You capture their relationship so well. I liked the parallels you drew between their celebrating the end of the eclipse, to our celebrating New Year.

I love angst that has to do with the characters hesitating to move on with the relationship in fear of what the other will think. Of course I love that they turn out to have happy endings too.

"Cain can feel his head spinning with the intensity of this kiss.

When he opens his eyes, he realizes it’s them, twirling like a top in midair."

Very nice touch! It stands to reason that DG might accidently use her powers...

I LOVED this. A wonderful, insightful look into Cain's feelings. It may be short, but you managed to convey so much in your words. Really, really beautiful. Bravo.

Awe... Tis really cute... I'm not sure about how you kept switching from time to time... like... The end of the show - a bit after the show - a year after...

I just seems sort of cut off and such...

and the continuation of 'she does this, and he does that' kinda takes away from the story...

Variation more conversation.

Beautiful story. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy.

--I'm pretty sure we share one mind. I don't mean to sound stuck up, but your writing is so...me. And I freakin' love it. The little scenes, the present tense that is so totally in the moment, the tiny hints of feeling and detail, the simpler word choice that never seems simple when it's put together like this... It's beautiful.

And don't worry about your characters. They are spot on.

Are you sure you're only 16? Cause I remember my writing from two years ago, and it was, for the most part, not as good as this.

I will be eagerly looking for more - and the beta offer still stands if you want it.

I'm glad I wasn't the only one seeing sparks between these two. And, oh how I wished there was a kiss... but I guess that's what fan-fic is for, right? And this was lovely.

Please get bitten by a plot bunny!

That was good!

Whoa twirling neat, I like that he would cry and break down what a sweet heart.
Maria

This is an absolutely amazing story-- I love Cain's characterization. Dead on to how they personified him on the show. The last line is what really cinched it for me... the simplicity and charm to it really made my day.

Hope to see more Tin Man works from you in the near future!

i really liked it. hope you write me.

Hehe, I love it! That was awesome!