ROFL. That was so cute! 'The stupidly imbecile of a little boy' that was Tsuna was so freaking ADORABLE that I could just explode. I loved how Chrome was the one telling the campfire story. I think she was telling how she wanted things to/should be.

LOVE IT XD So cute! Chrome tells the best campfire stories XD

That last line killed me.
Great story.

current position: roflmao XD
go CHROME! XD Thats definatly a story that she would tell -nods- I can picture it perfectly in my mind XD

Though I really have to wonder/worry when i read to this part of the story:
"as he would attacked three steps in, and most likely sold to a brothel by nightfall."

how the hell does someone as sweet as Chrome, who pretty much got her inwards all messed up from saving an innocent kitten know/talk about this stuff! 0.o It's all Ken and Chikusa 's fault.. *-*

Write more ^^

i really like the ending; nice touch! i would never have thought of such a creative analogy. keep up the good work and keep writing!

--sir gar the bold

^^ Yay for Tsuna love. However it was the last line that cracked me up.

That was just adorable. The last sentence was funny. XD

...nyah?^^sweet.vewy.

This was AWESOME XD The way you begin by a typical fairy tale-like story, and then the end... Just picturing everyone's reaction to this was priceless ! XD

Aw~ so cute ♥

This was total win.

I'll be telling this story to my baby cousin at night in the darkness, for sure.

Wow, I think you can wriet children stories easily! It's so easy to understand! =3

~Giggles~

Oh Chrome, you're so precious!

what a wonderful metaphor*chuckle* ohoho, is the bird Hibari?

so cute, keep up the good work!