aw... that was sweet..!!(^^,

I liked the story idea (Kurama gets jealous! XD), but I thought that everything happened too abruptly, and everything that happened were all too meshed in together. And um, maybe Kurama's and Botan's actions would have been more plausible and a little less OOC if you took somemore time to set the mood and get inside their head more... and uhh... yeah, that's all.

it looks good but you need to do some correcting on your grammer and adding more into the story looks more like a short story.

cute fic! i luv KB

haha kurama shocked funny

Cute.

Anou...It's d exact xerox copy of the Kamichu one...
Oh well...it was nice anyways...

cute story! thanks for this one! do write more KB fics!^^

i like the way this fic ended. it was surprising to see kurama approach botan the way he did, although he was a bit out of character though. but his OOCness fit the style of this fic, so it pretty much worked out, lol... would you ever consider writing a sequel?

Nice fic I love it, but would Kurama really go over and tell Botan the guy she likes is gonna have to fight him?? Its seems so unlike him and more like Yusuke! So wat do u thing of writing a sequel of this fic bout how their date went!