|Reviews for Second Love|
| thisisallterriblehELP 1/22/10 . chapter 5
awthat was sdad hirari.
y she nono be lovey-dovey with demetree?
| thisisallterriblehELP 1/22/10 . chapter 4
no lol her eyether
| thisisallterriblehELP 1/22/10 . chapter 3
no lol frum skimmimg hirari.
| thisisallterriblehELP 1/22/10 . chapter 1
| thisisallterriblehELP 1/22/10 . chapter 2
| Silent Shootting Star 8/17/09 . chapter 2
| Qu0thTheRavenNeverm0re 2/28/09 . chapter 1
fantastic use of metaphors and stuff...youre great w/ words! the only thing is that alexa sounds a bit childish, but she's supposed to be like fourteen.
| gaeaapril07 11/3/08 . chapter 5
i like he ending is quaint.
| gaeaapril07 5/7/08 . chapter 4
i really like your story. hope you can add more chapters as soon as you can.
| DivinelyLoved 4/13/08 . chapter 4
Aw...cute! You had very good voice in this chapter.
| Queen Twix 3/24/08 . chapter 3
Wow. Your writing is beautiful.
Although, you maybe need to do a quick spell check.
Other than that, though, it's great!
So, what happens next! :)
| The Hopeful Violinist 3/20/08 . chapter 3
LONDON? Now THAT'S unexpected, yet strangely intriguing... PLEASE FINISH IT! I am so glad to find another who has read the wonderful books of Elyon! I nearly went insane when I saw it on here! *big puppy eyes* Pwease finish? Pwease? I BEG YOU! PLEASE FINISH!
Reverend Lady Sasha the Perplexed of Longer Interval (a.k.a. Countess Sasha the Weird)
| DivinelyLoved 2/25/08 . chapter 3
I love it! Just one question, is she in the modern day London? I can't wait for more!
| DivinelyLoved 1/17/08 . chapter 2
Wow, I liked it! I think you have excellent word choice!
| DivinelyLoved 1/13/08 . chapter 1
I loved it! And I'm so happy I'm not the only person writing in this category now, I was so sad that I was the only one who had posted anything for Elyon. I can't wait for I.