THIS STORY ROCKS!! I LOVED HOW CUTE AND HUMOROUS CHAPTER ONE WAS..Hikaru and Kaoru were just adorable when they were practicing kissing KYAA! favourite moment EVER!! AND HOW SAD AND SWEET CHAPTER TWO WAS!! please update soon!!~♥

Amazing! ^-^ Love this idea of the twins getting mixed reactions and having to get through it together! This chapter mainly went for Hikaru's angst, and the uncertainty over wheather or not Kaoru is just going along with it for the sake of going along with it for Hikaru is very interesting! XD I'm really interested in seeing this go on! :P

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i woNDeR wHAt wiLL haPpeN neXt...

SUCH A GOOD WORK!


cOngRAtulatiOns!

*gives you cookie*

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this is so awesome! please update!

continue this cuz i luv it !

aw, so cu~te!! xD these chapters were great. ^^ and nah, there was a good amount of dialogue.

MORE MORE MORE MORE! I

Wow it's really great! Love it

ur fanfic is great ! i love it !Ur writing stil is also very good ! :P

cant wait for the next chapter ...

You should update, and here's a question, are the Hitachiin twins going to end up together?

Yays! I'm loving this story already! Please, please, update soon. I really wanna know what happens next! Happy writing,

Kunoichi21 -Loves L-

If I could describe this chapter with one word, it'd be: Adorable. Unless that's the word I used to describe the second chapter in which case... (shifty eyes)

This your first time writing about anyone kissing? Hehe, I'd never have noticed. You're pretty good at this kind of scene.

Wah! T_T Their mom is so evil, separating them like that! (Then again, the title wouldn't make sense if they weren't separated in one way or another. xD) Whatever.

I love it! This story overall is so cute! (And a little angst every other now and then doesn't hurt.)

MORE CHAPTER. NAO. -angry smiley- -threat- o.o

love it! please update soon?

I can pick up on your emotions when you write and it is overwhelming. I feel all of it and it makes my heart skip. It is a truly great experience and I can't wait to read more. Please don't keep your fans waiting too long.