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SSLE
2009-07-01 . chapter 13
Wow..what an ending...perfect, it´s just how it would be. Great story.
I´m sorry if I sound stupid but can you tell me the titles of those oneshots you mentioned?
Nuts&Bolts
2008-09-05 . chapter 3
I love Miss Moore i love the big words that she uses and I also think that Watson is in love
Victor
2008-08-29 . chapter 13
That story is so cool you VHunter07 are absolutly amazing i Love Miss moore she is so elegent and regal.
Susicar (undercover)
2008-08-15 . chapter 12
Terrible sorry, my friend, but i'm terribly busy lately. I promise my reviews by tomorrow (I hope) Thank you!
Sapphire Warrioress
2008-08-09 . chapter 13
Beautiful ending. I've really enjoyed this story with its wonderful blend of mystery, philosiphy and steadfast faith.
I think you handled the possible relationship between Marian and Holmes realistically, writing it in such a way that you finish this story content with their decision to go their separate ways, while still acknowledgeing their feelings.
I'd love to read any other stories you have in mind for Marian, whether sequel or oneshot, I'm sure they'll be as enjoyable and intriguing as your other works.
Thanks for sharing this tale.
xravenscroftx
2008-08-08 . chapter 13
Yay! You finished it! (And made it one of those rare-good!romance stories.)

I, for one, would love to read the mentioned one-shots. :)

Again, thanks for wrapping up the story nicely!
Amelia McDermid
2008-08-08 . chapter 13
good last chapters.
KCS
2008-08-08 . chapter 13
*blinks suspiciously* You know, I really think that's entirely plausible, the way you've set it up here. Those last three lines were stunning, and this:

"His grey eyes were filled with confusion. An emotion of which he knew nothing." --is so true, he literally wouldn't understand it. Poor old chap!

I really did like this, very much. You're a powerful writer, and this was very thought-provoking. Bravo, bravo!

(And I'm looking forward to the -ahem- new story!)
elecktrum
2008-08-08 . chapter 13
*Le sigh!* I'm sorry to see this end, but I'm glad that it ended so well. Thanks for a great read and some great characters - I enjoyed this story thoroughly and I hope you have some more like it for us in the future!
elecktrum
2008-08-08 . chapter 12
OUCH! That burns! Still, it's very fitting and true.
KCS
2008-08-08 . chapter 12
*wince* Boy, the truth surely does hurt sometimes. Poor old Watson...but she's entirely correct.

As to it being AU, who cares? That's the entire purpose of Fanfiction. :)

*hurries to next chapter*
MoonlitPuddle
2008-08-08 . chapter 13
Yiyoikes. 0o oo 00 o0

All is revealed. I hate you.

Lol, not really, only I do *NOT* like Holmes romances. Still... I'm glad you finished it. It was a good story, and even WITH the romance, it was much better the way you said it - that they couldn't be together even if they wanted to. It's far more plausible than other stories I've read.

I'd like to see the oneshots! :D
Sapphire Warrioress
2008-08-03 . chapter 10
I love this story! The plot is excellent, and the character of Marian is really well developed.
Your decision to include the backstory of her parents really helped to give this tale depth and meaning.
Holmes and Watson are wonderfully written, I especially loved this line from chapter 8.
"Curse this infernal poetry!" He cried, tossing the book into his chair.
My friend paced rapidly back and forth in our small
quarters, puffing at his pipe like a locomotive.
Absolutely hilarious!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Excellent job.
bcbdrums
2008-03-20 . chapter 10
just a nitpick, but wouldn't the DOCTOR stay with the wounded and the other man go for help? just a thought. still an excellent story
bcbdrums
2008-03-20 . chapter 8
you asked if the part with phillip moore was unnecessary--i skipped it entirely.
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