I loved this! MomoKai is, for some reason, it's one of my fave pairings o.O

I liked the way this developed, but maybe the first kiss was a bit unrealistic. It might have worked better if it was an accident, and they both responded after. But it was great the way it was too.

This was a really enjoyable story. I loved Ryoma's entrance- "Take your porn elsewhere." He's hilarious!

Great job, keep writing

"take your porn elsewhere" LMAO!

u should continue this.

*giggle* yay, Ryoma! He's the only person who could have walked in on that and acted like nothing interesting is going on...and the only one who could have gotten away with that comment. I enjoyed reading this! Well written!

That was awsome! I love how Echizen reacted to it all.

aww! and ryoma is so bad!

Are you going to make this a one shot? Cause I see a lot of potential in this story. I think you should continue until you're satisfied with it. Hoping you update soon!