-Interesting thought. It does make for a lot of sense! Besides, I have little to no doubt that all versions of the Wizarding World contain that law, despite the monogamous views of some writers. Remember, pure blood males rule it; if there was such a law in existance, what man would take it down?

Happy writing!

Amazing story, very well written and a tasteful M. I like adult stories, you do it with finess and a plot that puts to shame many of those that are just junk smut. Any recommendations?

Looking forward to reading over your other works,

Good luck and good work
-Mage

I thought that was a bit strange and different, but very readable and an interesting ending.

A good story, keep it up.

Nice story, though I'd say that 3 in bed together is not kinky, it's actually very nice indeed.

Nice story, I liked the way it ended...

Why did Hermione don't want more childrens in that point of the story? maybe she still feels bad about the situation...

Interesting take on the story, backed by a good explanation. Well done.

Not the first story I've seen with this principle, but probably one of the tamer ones, actually. There was one with ginny and harry and luna...

semi-funny, but real neat. Ron certainly messed things up in death, didn't he? He's gonna be very sheepish when he greets those two witches when they move on to the next great adventure.

That took half a day to read - a very interesting take on what might have happened - very long for a one shot!

ps. It took me nearly 6 months to get a chance to read it but it was worth the wait!

Nicely done joint marriage story.

Most other stories go completely crazy and lack a moral compass with multi wives and harems. You kept decency while allowing love and dignity.

Well done

What can I say... GREAT STORY! Usually a HG shipper myself (I didn't even know about shipping until after HBP) I could never see how people couple do a HHr ship... Ms. Rowling made it pretty clear in the books I always though. Oh well, I love all your stories first reading them on SIYE and had to check this one out here.

This make sense in a world of, by, and for the purebloods where the basic rule is whatever we want or need to do. It is also a tale for young wizards to watch what they say and how the say it or else your magic will hold you to it. I bet there was a story like that in BeedletheBard for the wizarding kids to read.

I can't decide if this story disgusted or amused me... probably both :P Great writing as usual, but you've probably just given me nightmares for a week. Oh well, maybe I'll block the second half of the story out from my mind and just focus on the lovey-dovey H/G fluff and the awesome final battle scene.

Again... definitely not realistic. I don't think it would be in character for any of the three to agree to an arrangement like that. And I really don't see wanting Harry to be with Hermione if he couldn't be with her himself. I think Ron's a bit too selfish for that.

So I'm giving this a 10/10 in writing... The plot? Maybe about 2.5/10. Sorry, but I'm just more into the traditional marriage and relationship sense of things.

Hello again - I finaly dragged my feet and decided to tell you why I didn't like this story ;-P. Well, I did the wrong thing and didn't follow your words at the start of the story and I took it a bit too seriously I'm afraid - or something. Or maybe you didn't write it in a humorous enough way. Whichever, I didn't really get to enjoy this. At the end, I stopped and asked myself why. My first thought was your meddling with the h/g thingy, but I'm not that obssessed, you know? I've read plenty non-h/g stories before (I'd say about one out of ten stories I read is non-h/g) and also harem-harry, so I thought harder and I believe I got to the bottom of it. Even more important that your sticking for the h/g pair through your stories is the most permanent theme of your stories: Harry is in charge. From Choices to Leave Me Alone, he's only making his own choices and going his own way - even in LMA he is so standing on his own two feet, which really was more important in that story than the OC you threw in (it helped though that you brought H and G back together reasonably fast - ;-P). So yes, this latest story of yours sucks because Harry is again dealt a bought deal and there's nothing he can do but dance to the music. As I said before countless times, if I want to read that, I would go read the canon again. But I don't. So yeah, this is the mighty task your little fic accomplished: I realised there's something even more basic that I require in a HP fic, even before H/G: Harry taking control of his own choices, way, path, whatever you call it.

So are you done with experimenting for the time being, and may I hope for some quality H/G in control fic(s) in the (hopefully near) future?

Thanks for the ride, dude, it's more often than not a pleasure ;-P

Yeah, you got to see my tongue a lot through this review - I just didn't want you to take it too seriously and get the impression I am ** off at you or anything. So maybe this is what you should've put more in this little fic: a lot of tongue action :-D

Hope to hear some great fics from you again, soon!

Thanks,
Dan

PS: Almost forgot: Surely, from a creative writing perspective, your story was very well written and everything - I think so, at least, considering I've never been even close to the creative writing subject matter in my life. Plus, English is not my first language either, so don't take my literary clueless remarks too seriously - tongue again ;-P