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Reviews for: Yumi's Surprise
trackfeet 7/5/08 . chapter 1
I wished you had written more. I really wanted to know if Yumi would stay at Kadic or move back to Japan!
trixter 93 3/18/08 . chapter 1
nice, yumi's a border now, but why was she in tears"
janice 12/29/07 . chapter 1
lol the end was so hillarious

but there was no OxA

nyways it was cool
Alexandria J 12/29/07 . chapter 1
Yep, stil waiting for an update... How much longer are you gonna make me wait? I'm practically dying...
Wonder what'll happen now that Yumi's a border? Does most of it include Ulrich? Of course it does!

Alex
Ocytavia 12/28/07 . chapter 1
So, is Yumi goning to stay at Kadic, or is she going to move to Japan with her family?
It's a pretty good story, but why was Yumi crying?
I know I say this a lot to people, but your kinda rushing into the story. Try to slow down a bit, and help the reader understand the storyline better.
But, other than that, it's excellent. Keep writing.

Cya Later

OcyTaviAh
PeaceToThePeople 12/28/07 . chapter 1
haha, poor Ulrich!

looks good so far, cant wait for the rest!

update soon!
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