Hi. I'm just wondering if you meant for the DA name to be changed by Dumbledore now that it's out or if you meant for it to have always been Defense Association.

This story is great :) I would love to read more!

love this story and I hope you get a new chapter out soon!

Well dang it...let's get a move on an update! I'm truly enjoying this story. There are a number of spelling errors, but it actually looks like you're typing very fast and either hitting a wrong key, or missing one, or hitting too many. I do the same thing and when I go back and proofread, it drives me crazy. Otherwise, it's wonderful. I am enjoying the way the characters are interacting, and I really like Ailill.

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Nice story you have here. Excellent in fact. I hope that you will update as soon as you can.

love your story!

wonderful story!
looking forward to read more :D

Ah! No! There are no more chapters! Bad! Update soon, please?

As for a real review, I've loved the length of your chapters as well as the storyline itself. I understand wanting to set a scene for what the elven village/city looks like, but frankly I had to skip it because I found it boring. Including details into dialogue and action generally holds interest better than what essentially amounts to a laundry list. As for this chapter, I don't see the point of most of it. For almost the whole story you've followed mainly Harry and some of Lucius, but suddenly you give rather close and useless details about other characters' holidays. The last conversation between the Weasleys has some point to it, but other than that it seems like fluff. An author I read once about writing said that all descriptions and actions should be working double or triple time, their use being more than simply 'setting the scene', but actually giving pertinent details for the plot or essential background and sneak peaks.

Sorry to ramble on about that, it's the wine talking. I loved your story thus far except the last chapter.

OMG, that was amazing, when will Draco find out about Harry and Lucius. And what are Harry's parents like?
Update when you can. It's an amazing idea when Harry's the magical creature with the mate and he has to do the wooing and I loved the part when Harry took care of Lucius, to show that he really loves him. Could you have a part when Harry has to show draco that he can trust Harry before he finds out about them?

I like the story, so I hope you keep up the writing and post soon...even if it has been six months :)

~Moony

*Flail* I love this so far! Thanks for getting me into the LMHP pairing even more. :D I can't wait to read more~!

i love it cant wait to read more that i cant

I like how accept his new life.

Hi, I'm loving the story so far but just wanted to point out that you've written Hermione was teaching the stunning spell which s stupefy but all her students cast the full body bind instead.

I'm off to continue reading now, thanks for a great story.

Please I need a new chapter, please! This story is amazing and I keep hoping that it will be updated. You are a Amazing writer with a great gift. I can't wait until everyone is back from hoildays what will happen!