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| Star's Snowflake 2008-09-23 ch 4,  | abuseYAY! They've reunited!! That was short, but man do I wanna know what happens next! Don't stress about updating, but please don't drop this fic. -S. Snowflake |
| Star's Snowflake 2008-08-10 ch 3, | abuseForgot to leave a review for chappie #3, whoops! Anywho, it's very good like the first 2. I'm definately keepin' this story on my alerts page, bravo! |
| Star's Snowflake 2008-07-26 ch 2, | abusePlease keep going with this. I love reading Little Shop fics, & this is surprisingly good! |
| xTobyxluverx 2008-07-22 ch 2, | abusei like it! im glad chapter 2 was used for explainin, because the first one left me wondering and a little confused. but yea, its good. |
| FutureAuthoress 2008-05-05 ch 2, | abuseAw!! This story is really pulling one for itself! I LOVE it, keep up the great work! =D |
| FutureAuthoress 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseIt's good so far!! Please, do continue =D -Meg |
| Ever living 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was pretty good. I watched the movie again two days ago so I read this. Good job. Keep it up. |
| gottalovepixar and broadway 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abusethat's pretty good.. the only thing i would greatly consider is creating another line to separate other people's sentences .. lol, that was hard to put into words example : "Hi Twoey," said Seymour. "Hi," replied the plant |
| PhantomBialystock 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseI like it so far! Very well done and it's pretty interesting! Can't wait until your next chapter. The only thing I would suggest is making a paragraph for each set of dialogue. For example: "Isn't it funny Audrey?" "I know, Seymour." Don't put them all in one paragraph or it gets confusing. |