YAY! Your back! I was getting worrird that it wasn't gonna be continued. I love this story! Its one of the few stories that given me inspiration for mine. The drama you portray in your characters is simply emotional and realistic.
I was so taken back when Maple-Mark got killed, I cant believe that happened! You certainly have a thing for surprising the reader! Caught me off guard!

Keep it up, I really want to see what turns out in this fate twisting and heart stopping story!

Ill be keeping watch!

RandomRooster, Clucking out.

Do I decect a slight hint of romance in this chapter?

*crie* poor maple-mark...she didn't deserve that...seriously hoping that you update this dude its awesome!

now who doesn't like to crash through a door!? *crash* see? I only got seven shards of glass in my arm, awesome story dude!

*hides gun behind back* now why would we kill you? *evil grin* you make such great storys!

Awesome dude awesome :D Riolus are so cool, but if they're better then lucario...im not sure...

wow...didn't see that coming...wait...I should have shouldn't I? Awesome story dude!

poor lucario...losing his sister and being expiremented on, sucks doesn't it?

HI! I just have this to say... Nice plot, plz update soon cuz i gotta know what comes next.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I JUST FOUND THIS STORY AND I HOPE THAT YOU UPDATE SOON AND OTHER STUFFS!

Man... How sad. Poor Piplup. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

I love the chapter!! Too bad Maple-Mark had to die...

Please update soon!

Wow. I've kind of forgotten who everyone is...

Wait, did someone call Fang Vespera?

~General Everin Stormclaw, Dragon Prince, out.

ML: aw...very cute! go Lucario giving hugs! update again soon!