Wow...very interesting chapter. Thoroughly enjoyed it. I just never thought that the dad would be this cruel to kick Toph out of his estate. I never really liked that particular theme used in Tokka stories, but it's all your choice. I just find it slightly out of character.

But other than that, I appreciate the good work. Again, awesome job.

Holy cow! That was a pretty intense ending... P.S. Katara should shut her mouth!! O Poor Sokka... I hope everything turns out okay :[

YAY! your writing more! good chapter!

Interesting how it's progressed...

Gotta feel sorry for Toph and Sokka. Sometimes, things don't work out as planned.

Anyways, I'm still really liking this story, and can't wait to see it continued!

that was a epic win in this readers eyes bravo i look forward to the next instalment

Oh snapmuffins! 0.0 You just left it there? Evil!!

The chapter was great and, of course, enjoied. It made me laugh and made my jaw drop. Great job!!

Toph's dad really is a Jerky McJerkface.

oh. this is getting really good. Katara + Aang are a bit OOC, But not Toph and Sokka they are really in character. Good Work.

love the chapter and turn of events. great job and can't wait to read more. good luck with the end of school.

A rather interesting twist of events. It wasn't what I was expecting to happen. I like it though! Of course then I have to think about what's going to happen next and that leaves a lot of questions out in the open. So hopefully you'll answer them in the next chapter or two. If not I'll definitely be asking them. Anyway can't wait until update again!

Wow, Toph's father is a ginormous jerk! what a freak! I'm so mad at him, I could blow him off of a cliff. You know, I can airbend, so I'll do that. JK, but I wish I could airbend! That was a good chapter, can't wait for more!XD!

hahahaha love Toph... I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Great story! I loved it! plz update soon!

loved it, and thanks for putting the spunk back into Toph at the end! Can't wait to read more. =)

aw. that was really sweet. a little ooc, but i really liked it.

-MWTKL

Holy crap! You updated! I've been waiting forever for this, it was a great chapter i really liked this part...'I’m just digging myself a huge piranhas filled hole….Or maybe a hole filled with angry firebenders….Or Firebending piranhas…'. It was giggle inducing. I hope you can update sooner next time, but if not I understand I can't update as much as I would like to either.