okay, as much as i get this is totally supposed to be an unerquited love fic, i dont suppose if i beg enough that u'll write a sequel where seth comes to his senses n breaks it off with summer n realises ryan's the one for him? cos not only is it hard to find authors who are A)actually good at writing (i'm fasirly particular), but also; B)wirte some decent slash. I'm not talking about smut, but the stuff that recognises the closeness of seth n ryan, makes them act on it, n builds up to that sickenly sweet n gorgeous relationship. and that's a little messy at the start, cos realistically the situatuion is awkward, but they sort it out in the end. even if u dont want, write other fiocs, cos i truly did enjoy this one. cheers! kat

Argh, don't stop now!! I love it, especialy how Sophie sees right through him!

So I think your writting is really good, and I loved how this fic was out together.
Favourite part of the wholee thing:
"No, I-" God, how did he explain this? "I don’t really do relationships,"
"Why?" Seth asked.
Because no-one can measure up to you.
LOVED IT.
Great work.

Nice work! The perceptive Sophie, the unrequited love, well done! There aren't many stories where Seth is so uncomfortable with Ryan batting for both teams, so very original too, will you continue this? I look forward to seeing more of this universe, happy New Year!

Aw this was brilliant
Very well written, intriguing