I totally agree with Beth, let's just have a bit of fun. That was a great little romantic story. I would have loved to know what they did then.

Noooo! More!

Ah this is brilliant!

Cute idea and thanks for writing.

Yeah!

You posted this months ago, but I just found it. It is very good. I look forward to the rest of the chapters to see your version of that night in NYC.

Penina

Oh my God, how cute!

Really, really cute!

Good job!

This is very cute. You made it believable, which can be hard with this show. Good Job!

AWE! cute story.

I like your take on this so far. I was really upset and unsatisfied at the way this episode ended too, though I understand the need to forestall the Mick/Beth relationship from a creative point of view. Still though...our shipper hearts can dream, and write! Right? I'm anxious to see where you take this so please update soon :o)

hopefully you're not going to leave it like this...show us their night on the town, and what happens after that...this is the start of a very good fic...don't stop it here...

-Fen

the only thing i don't like is that the chapters are so short...other than that, well written...

-Fen

even though most of this first chapter is identical to the shows ending, i do like the last paragraph, giving us a hint at what mick was thinking...on to the next

-Fen

I liked it. Many people would have wanted the show to follow this line instead of the way they ended the episode. Tell us more. :)

That was so sweet! If only the episode had actually ended that way.

Loved it! Great job:)