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silverymoonfire
2008-10-05
ch 4,
abusewow your story is so unique please update soon :)
great job
popochi-chan
2008-09-22
ch 4,
abusegawd! this vampire fic is great! kinda reminds me of vampire knight. Update soon!:D
CrAzY-SiLLy-Me
2008-08-07
ch 4,
abuseWow. i was so into this that i hadn't realized that it was the last chapter as of now. Geh. >__< I love how you do your fics. THere's just something in them that draws you to them.

I also heard you're studying in UST. ^__^V I do too.
Poochie-Pop
2008-06-08
ch 4,
abuseOMG! I read your other stories so I had to read this, and I L-O-V-E it! Please update soon!
AGENT KUMA-CHAN
2008-05-25
ch 4,
abuseOH! THIS REMINDS ME OF INTERVIEW WITH A VAMPIRE.
(Sasuke is pulling a Lestat on me..)

Nice discriptions, and if it is a hundred years ago, for the next few chapters, don't forget that there will be differences between the past and the present.

The way you have naive Gaara (KAWAII!) saying those sweet words every now and then just adds to the flavour, and..I like also how you have their small interactions, the way you remember the present.

(have they reached the ice-cream shop yet?)

I wonder what happened to Sasuke during those hundred years to make him all alone now...
tiktakz
2008-04-20
ch 4,
abusenice story when will sakura show up? update soon!
CrimsonCherryBlossom13
2008-04-13
ch 4,
abusecant wait for more
Neitzarr
2008-04-12
ch 4,
abuseWow, that is some story.
GAARA IS SO KYOOT! XD
Yay Sakura! Wow. Poor Naruto and Hinata and ...everyone really.

Cant wait for more! Its a very interesting storyline, and way to tell it. Awesome.
NeeNVirgo
2008-04-11
ch 4,
abuseyayayayayayayay!
NeeNVirgo
2008-04-11
ch 3,
abuseAMAZING!
neebu
2008-04-11
ch 4,
abuseoh that was really good! lol.
I CANNOT WAIT FOR SAKURA'S APPEARANCE IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!!
I'm really REALLY excited! lol.
Thanks again for the chappie!
: )
djagito
2008-04-11
ch 4,
abuseYay! More soup from you! =D I'm glad you updated! *smooch smooch* OH! You have to stop starting all the paragraphs with inverted commas, the speech hasn't ended yet right? It's kinda confusing to see that.

Well, here's an example. Taken from teh almost!Sasunaru excerpt.

“I bit my lip, sweat trickled along my jaw line. And after seconds of withholding I parted my lips and sank my teeth on his neck.

“That time, it was different. I could hear his slow breathing as clearly as how his heart beat played in my ears. My hands curled around his shoulders when I felt him stir.

“He’s going to die.

“My head snapped backward in shock. I didn’t want to kill him and I was inwardly grateful for that voice that echoed in my mind. I released his shoulders and moved away from the bluish body. My sanity and control was back and so was the guilt of seeing that boy, cold and immobile, on the bed.”

P.S : Otto is spelled Oto right? Oto means sounds, and Otto, well, I don't know. =D
neebu
2008-03-23
ch 3,
abuseoh it's getting so interesting!
Update soon please!
And I thank you muchos for your update!
This story is really interesting and I can't wait to hear more!
: )
Winter's Holly
2008-03-23
ch 3,
abuseEh?! You're in college? Well, hehehe, I'm going to start college in the fall! Anyways, the way you portray every imagery and feelings of the characters is simply splendid. The different kinds of interactions as Sasuke tells the story and as he speaks with young Gaara is very well done. He can still tell of his memories yet still converse kindly to a young child. I'm enjoying this very much. It's very well-written.

Sincerely,

Holly
Kai
2008-01-12
ch 1, anon.
abusei love it!
can't wait to read the next chappie.
glad to see you're writing again =D
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