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| Ally1313 2008-06-15 ch 15, | abuseOH. MY. GOD. This was AMAZING. You literally had me crying, like, five times. This has probably got to be one of the best Sasuke and Neji friendship stories ever, if not THE best. If I could grade this on a scale of one to ten, it would be an eleven. |
| KARUSH 2008-05-17 ch 15, anon. | abuseI LOVED YOUR STORY! BUT WHY IS IT IN THE SASUKE\NEJI SECTION? IF IT'S A NEJI\TENTEN ONE?? TOO BAD IT'S OVER! WRITE SOME MORE!! |
| oh-my-Ra 2008-04-27 ch 15, | abuseI always knew the scouts were evil, specially since mah best friend is one!! Ha! I know of you're plot now /cackles maniacally/ update soon! :D |
| Dreaming-Wolf 2008-04-23 ch 15, | abuseIf this is the last chapter is this the end? Will there be a sequel? I loved the last chapter. It was so funny! |
| Kayarin 2008-04-22 ch 15, | abuseWonderful story! I loved all of it, and the ending was hilarious! |
| PlayfulSylph 2008-04-22 ch 15, | abuseIn the message you sent me it says that this is the last chappie T.T please say it aint so! YAY! Genma is awake I don't think its possible if the died that would just kill part of the story, where will we get our genmaness! ~Wuv the Playfulness* p.s i love that song from FOB i have it on my ipod lol |
| LizUchiha 2008-04-22 ch 15, | abuseThis was by far the funniest chapter (I agree with you!) I couldn't stop laughing! It was really funny, like I finally would stop laughing and try to catch my breath, but then I would read another funny part and would start laughing again and it would happen all over again! I loved every single part, but I'll have to say that my favorite part was the prank that Genma did to Itachi, so yeah...it was beyond amusing/hilarious, so yeah...now I feel nostalgic...I really wanna read again one of your stories, so yeah...I can't wait to read another Naruto fiction from you, you'll be sure I'll be there, so yeah...anyways, I really loved all of the story, it had great detail and it was like really realistic, so yeah...and don't worry for the long wait, it was definietly worth it, so yeah...and I loved the scouts plan to rule the world, so yeah...brilliant story. I love it so much and please write soon! And, I almost forgot, I know about Itachi in the manga and stuff, but could you please tell me where I can read it (again)? Please, that would be really great, so yeah...the site wehre I used to read it doesn't work that well anymore, so yeah...anyways, great story! P.S.Please write soon again! |
| kuzon234ray 2008-04-22 ch 15, | abuseHahahahahahahahaha! That has to be one of the funniest things I've ever read! Great chapter! -Ray |
| brightgreenskribbles 2008-04-22 ch 15, | abuse*raiseshand* lets get him! its almost sad for this to end. I've been waiting for the last chapter but now that I have it... I don't know... sigh oh well it waass funny! My review is probably crappy bt I'm realy tired right now even if it is only three thirty! So watcha plannin next huh tell me tell me! ~skribbles-chan~ |
| miniDeid 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseWow. I'm surprised, it was a very quick update! I love when is quick! Personally, my favorite part was the Neji with Tenten scene...I really liked it because I felt happy for Neji 'cause during the whole story he was sad...well...kinda depressed, it seemed to me. Also, it didn't feel like it was your first time writting a scene like that...I thought it was amazingly well-written. I also liked when Sasuke was retelling the story...it was a nicer way to relive the past events...I didn't find a lot of detail (like glory and graphic detail, like some people like to do) and I thought it was very realistic. Since, I seriously doubt, a person would like to tell it exactly how it happened. Anyways, I can't wait to read the next and final chapter. I hope you can update soon 'cause I can't wait! |
| brightgreenskribbles 2008-04-06 ch 14, | abuseI'm to tired to write a decent review... softball tournament today and I pulled a muscle in my back sliding into second... ouch. Then I sprained my wrist throwing to home plate... softball hurts... trust me... anyway enough complaining neji and ten-ten were absolutly made for each other... squee.. me and my 75 mail messages I aquired in the past two weeks thank you for posting. Unlike some other authors...grumble/evantis/grumble . I just read my whole review and its sounds like one giant complaint... oh well ~skribbles-chan~ |
| LizUchiha 2008-04-06 ch 14, | abuseI absolutely loved this chapter, so yeah...it was so nice and cute after all the mean stuff that happened to them! A very nice change, so yeah...and I thought the fluffiness (however you spell that, so yeah...) was very nice, so yeah...I mean, since you've never wrote it before, so yeah...I really liked this chapter...I think my favorite part when the interrogation and Sasuke retelling the story, so yeah...I don't know why, though, and I loved the part when you said: "Naruto shuddered at the thought. He had never been able to recall a time when Uchiha Sasuke had been afraid." I really loved that part because it was so...I don't know, I just liked it (loved it, actually), so yeah...I can't believe you only have one more chapter! I'm so sad, I got so attached to this story, like seriously, so yeah...actually I get attached to all your stories, but, so yeah...I can't wait to read the fianl chapter! You scared me so much! Cause like you always reply before an update, so yeah...but this time you didn't, so yeah...so I was like: "Did I say something wrong?" and then my sister came in and told me that you hadn't reply to her review either and then...so yeah...but then I read the Waffle House and I was like: "Okay, good it wasn't me, so yeah..." so yeah...Please hurry up and update! And now for the last time in this story... P.S.Please update soon! |
| PlayfulSylph 2008-04-04 ch 14, | abuseGASP! Is like tenten and Neji and couple now? im sorry for your loss i bet you guys will totally kickass! UPDATE OR ELSE...im afraid to say anything else now O.o ~Wuv the Playfulness* |
| uk3-obeys-seme 2008-04-04 ch 14, | abusewow..it just gets better...! |
| kuzon234ray 2008-04-04 ch 14, | abuse*cries* T-there was n-no cliffhanger t-this time...*hugs* THANK YOU! -Ray |