wow...i really liked that! Perhaps you should make a sequel! You don't have to, though. Just a suggestion. ^_^

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMGOSH! i wondered why she always stood by the beach. i realy luved this AND YOU GOTTA UPDATE SOME TIME SOON! please? PLEASE?

Kittie

great story, I think that it is cool. Karen is acctually someone else.keep going.

good story! is ther another chapter?

This isnt bad.I would ask you to write more chapters,but seeing as I want even more for you to focus on "It's My Life",I wont.Besides,this is a pretty good story the way it is.=P WRITE MORE I.M.L SOOOOON x.x

~Pheep ^.o

Interesting. I wish you would continue to write more though.
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"Mocketh thou not the sheep, but be fearful of the wolf within"

Well, that was interesting. I don't get into HM64 very much--I'm a BTN guy--but that was very touching.

I don'y know if your are, but... CONTINUE! That was so sweet. I look forward to any type of sequel this has in the future.

*sniff* That's so sad...but so sweet. SEQUEL!!! Pweez?

hiya cousin, i liked ur story, please continue. i don't care what most people write, this story ROXS!! so do all the other stories u've written. for all the peeps who are reading this review, fo to the directery and look up mirri666, and u can see all her other stories! see ya cousin!

Neatorific! ^_^ (*gagk* that sounded so gay :P) Well, anywho, this is a cool story! ^__^ I loooove originality ^--^ My only complaint is that sometimes you explained things that were pretty obvious, like how she could tell it was sunset by the orange in the clouds, or how the bottle was very wet. It came out of the water, duh! But please continue this story! It definetly deserves a sequel! ^_^

That was different. And I mean that in a good way.

Cool story. I could tell you took your time to peice everything together in this story.

I can't say much for HM: 64 fiction, as it is inferior to the PS version (any game where the publisher can't even spell thier own name right is a cause for concern), but I like your writing style.