WHEN DID WE HIT DISNEY WORLD! I WISH I WAS ONE OF THOSE THIS IS SO FUNNY

I love space balls!11 all time fav line is you shot my hair! omg my parentos saw this movie in thearters when they were dating! i think thats really funny.

It was kind of hard to read, and some lines didn't make sense:

"General Grease flashes the middle fingers at the heroes dead."

0.o

Other than that, it's not bad I guess, your writing leaves much to be desired. I mean, I don't care if you use script style, you can write the way as you please. But, there is no action described at all, I know scripts are a lot more detailed than this, I have read some. I've only read the first chapter, so I'll look over the others.

You should have called it, "Spaceballs 2: The Search for more money" lol!

I love it, we need more Spaceballs fics!