Wow...such a powerful and heart-breaking story. I enjoyed every word of it, pure brilliance!

By the way, 'Until we bleed' by Kleerup of the Mikaels Cello version goes well with this story. It gave me the correct atmosphere for it, especially the death scene.

omqosh this is the first story that's ever made me cry. iloved your story. qreat job *sniffle sniffle*

aaw i'm so sad that this story is over


great job though


wah! someone deserves a hug!


*hugging!*

“His body might be alive, Ron, but his heart died with Rose,”

brilliant line

ahahaha...

depressing... T.T

but still good as always.

you captured all the characters' emotions perfectly

and yeah, like u said in the last chapter's authors note, this is a much sadder way to have things turn out. and thanks for the heads up for Kleenex cuz i needed them so badly

ron is a meanie poo

uhm... aaw i hate being mean so this isnt really a flame,

lily's eyes arent supposed to be green, albus's eyes are the only ones that are green. i guess lily is kinda like a carbon copy of ginny.

good story though! im glad you continued with it!

I was originally skeptical about your story- the cousin incestuous relationship twist seems to be a fairly common ruse with other writers. But I have to say that the overall turnout of your story is fantastic (considering its original premise).

The latter chapters are perhaps my favourite parts of this piece. It is very powerful writing that not many other writers can successfully master. And I think you have ended it well. So thank-you for sharing.

*Dont be put off by the R&J comments- R&J is the most famous example of couple suicides, so its not surprising that people jump to this conclusion. Keep in mind that many will jump to this if any story involves this particular theme... so dont feel bad about it.

damn, what a moment to kill rose you chose!

i agree with you on the name thing, but, as i'm sure everybody has told you, ron's brother's name is charlie, so you kinda kept up with the tradition... also, you're kinda sick when it comes to ron and hermione, i mean, yeah, i hate ron and i've always had, but to make him hurt rose and starve her, that's cruel... oh, and you ahve another thing, you mix him with her, it's annoying trying to find out if you're talking about rose in the same sentence or you just put the wrong article, or whatever it is... still, you're the only one who thought and actually managed to write a story with this pairing and i love you for that >:D<

OMG!
This story is amazing, it breaks your heart, it's realistic. Fantastic job

u say u hate naming people after family. i hate to break it to u but Molly & Arthur have a son Charlie, who is Bill's brother. therefore, charlie is charlie's uncle.

This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read, and believe me I am picky lol I dont just add any old story to my favourites.
You made us like a pairing that we really shouldnt have.
I spent half the story wishing that somehow they could miraculously not be cousins.
It was an excellent idea!
Im not sure if it was just me but I was wishing they werent cousins (kind of like how everyone wishes jace and clary werent brother and sister - not that were sure till march 24 - thats if your a mortal instruments by cassie clare fan).
But anyways a great story you should seriously consider writting something else like this.
Not enough forbidden love fanfictions out there that are beside the obvious (im sick of the draco/hermione or ginny or rose/scorpius ones cause their so presumed)
but anyways
greatt story!

hey. i made you a banner... :D this story is just so sad... :(( it made me cry the whole time and now i'm craving for some rose/jamesii loving :|

i think i should be disgusted with the fact that i liked this incestuous pairing...but, it's just the emotions are so sincere. :|

http://pinefir./art/Not-Now-Nor-Never-114498456

^that's the link up there^

a rose/james pairing?!?!? wow. i thought it impossible at first but i stumbled upon this on a lj comm...and the first 32 chapters rock! gash i've been a fan of weird and cannon impossible pairings and this is another addition to my growing list..i've long been tired of scorpius and rose and i'm glad that this fic is available for all the other nextgen->rose fics :D