 Kinoshita Kristanite 2008-01-18 . chapter 1Nya! Thrill pair love! SO Fuji... why is it that everyone besides my Fuji is spot-on? I should probably actually read it first. Oh well. |
 mysteriously.mesmerized 2007-12-31 . chapter 1Nya~! How sweet! XD Now Thrill is hacking into my brain more than ever! XP A few spelling mistakes, but great story! I loved it!
*~Crystal~* |
 RandomAznNoobieNeenjazoncrack 2007-12-30 . chapter 1Ayumi Nazu:
hi it's me again!
anyway, i like the beginning of this story, i found it very funny how Fuji made chocolates with wasabi paste in them! and then gave some to Ryoma-kun, thinking that he might like some!
XP
other then that, the only part i didn't like is the yoai, cause...well, -ahem- i am NOT a yoai fan, anyway, hope to see some more stories comming from u!~ (i'd be great if it wasn't yoai ^.^)
bye bye |
 Ahotep 2007-12-30 . chapter 1Wasabi chocolate shouldn't be bad. I ate some with red chili and it was really good.
I really liked this little fic. I saw Echizen wearing a lovely baby blue pajamas with little Karupin drawn on it, hugging a plush Karupin while rubbing his eyes. |
 Sweet Obsidian Rain 2007-12-29 . chapter 1-tackleglomps- ANGIEKO. Have I mentioned how awesome you are for writing this. -squee- More Thril.
-bounces-
Nyahaha.
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He readied himself to close and slam the door in front of his senpai’s face when Fuji pulled Echizen towards his body and into a light but passionate kiss in the doorway.
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OMG. I just started laughing really hard at 'he readied himself to close and slam he door...'
XD Erm... It was not my prompt (I think it was Tari-san's). But hey, I'm not complaining. XD
-R |
 Dudly 2007-12-29 . chapter 1Boh!
Less Thrill and more Royal!
xD
A bit predictable (wasabi and a kiss, seriously xD) but well-written, thus the reading is enjoyable.
But... wasabi chocolate is -still- predictable, coming from Fuji! XD
You could have... make him do a cacti shaped chocolate and when Ryoma would bite into it, he'd discover the cacti is still under... y'know?
^^
Well. It still classify under the Good Work category!
Congrats!
Dudly -xx- |
 rebeccasanfujieijilvr 2007-12-29 . chapter 1hm happy birthday than sweet obsidian rain mines coming up can u make me a oneshot too^^? |