Great! I love the interaction with Don and Leo! It's so fantastic! It really makes you think...

I... just... wow! If I wasn't so enthralled in the story, I'd probably have noticed some sort of grammatical error, but either there weren't any, or I was just really into it. THe way I judge a story is by whether or not the author can get me to feel every thing the character does, and get me to see everything. You did.

interesting but i don't think officially anybody was left with the burden. 14? they were in their later teens 18-19, leo was gone for 2 years so don should be 16
just shoot me...lol

Hey, it wasn't too bad. I think you described everyone pretty well, too.

Good job!

hm...that was pretty good. but i always thought that donny had blue eyes...guess i'll have to watch the movie again. truly inspiring...i think i wanna do a TMNT story too! thx you cured my writers block! never seen donny break down before. you're pretty good at these cute soft, gentle sweet stories. keep it up!

Wow, a really good and interesting story!

Very well done! I really enjoyed this, the idea of Leo having asked Don to 'take over' while he was gone and then Raph's opinion at the end was a great idea!

Keep up the great writing!

Got to hand it to you. It is a great piece of work. ^_^
*puts it to favorites*

Oh my gosh! Poor Donnie ;(
I love the story, though. Great job on it ^^