hey would you mind if I took over this story? I mean you don't have to let me but I like it and I want to continue it.

-runs in circles- OH NOES! SUMFIN HAS'TA BE DONE!D: NOES!

very good story by the way!:D

-starts to squirm- oh! save him sora!! YOU HAVE TO!-runs to the next chapter-

Uh, hello, I really like your story first of all, it's gonna be great! But I gotta say, there are alot of silly mistakes in the chapters. Grammar and spelling mostly. It might be best if you look over the document again and make some corrections so that it's easier to read. Again: Great work on the storyline, but the story itself just needs a few corrections. Sorry for the bluntness.

this is good! I really like it!

-_-*GASP* suspense! please update soon!-_-

-_-i wonder if sora will make the right decision... please update soon!-_-