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Yomu
2008-04-03
ch 2,
abuseUh, hello, I really like your story first of all, it's gonna be great! But I gotta say, there are alot of silly mistakes in the chapters. Grammar and spelling mostly. It might be best if you look over the document again and make some corrections so that it's easier to read. Again: Great work on the storyline, but the story itself just needs a few corrections. Sorry for the bluntness.
Roxas-likes-icecream
2008-02-02
ch 2,
abusethis is good! I really like it!
Smiley Smackdown
2008-01-05
ch 2,
abuse-_-*GASP* suspense! please update soon!-_-
Smiley Smackdown
2007-12-30
ch 1,
abuse-_-i wonder if sora will make the right decision... please update soon!-_-
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