ZOMG! I was so shocked that the first chapter was about Tsume and not Toboe! I was like, "eh? What's going on?" and then it was Tsume and I was like "cool, this seems so intresting! This is totally the best wolf's rain fanfic I've ever read - and I'm only on the first chapter!

Much love from one yaoi fan to another,
AKS

Good job what a good ending. I don't know about the tougher in leather but it is hotter!

Oh, maybe red does make Tsume a little hot under the collar.

I like how Tsume doubts himself he's a very real person/wolf in your fic.

Aww yes this is prefect!

Great job! It was a very interesting chapter it interwove the physical and the inner-battle of Tsume's very well.

This is great. I notice you're kinda like me when it comes to chapter lengths/styles. They vary quite a bit from one chapter to the next. I always figured that there is no reason to clutter a chapter with unnecessary words or events, so if it's short blah. I just want to get the meaning across and I want to do it in as many or as little words as possible. I'm glad there is someone else out their that isn't obsessed over quantity! It's all about quality. I can't really say that we're at the same level of writing, but it's still about quality!

What a full-circle kinda event.

Sorry I didn't review in the last chapter! I shouldn't be reading at work but I am. I like this universe that you created with this not-so-Tsume-pack. Good job. I was actually looking for more of a romancy fluffy fic but a good fic is a good fic.

Thanks for the advice! See how long its been since I've seen the show. I use Youtube all the time but I never even thought about looking to see if they had any Wolf's Rain episodes up. I think I watched the show 3 years ago so Youtube wasn't really around. I remember watching the 'Nummy Nummy' kid on some obsucre site

Aww what a good chapter. I don't really know what to compliment, maybe just the fact that it's so in character and bittersweet.

Oh good I thought something was up when no names were used until the end of the fic! It's been so long since I've seen or read anything Wolf's Rain it's so sad! I got mad at the series because I missed the last episode!

*Giggles.*
I like it.
Very much.
Quent rules! X3

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

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