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Phantom SunsSong
2008-04-15 . chapter 14
Whoo! I almost squealed when I saw this was updated, but I was in chemistry class sending an unfinished lab report to myself, so people would have looked at me a bit strangely...

I'm glad this is getting continued! -goes to read-

-sees the word 'dragon' and squeals, then continues-

...Okay then. I have no clue what just happened, but okay. Still, the bit of Ed/Win fluff was nice, even if it was some kind of halucination.

Anywho! I hope agent manages another chapter, 'cause I'm really looking forward to reading more of this! Though I don't mind having to wait.
agent000
2008-04-14 . chapter 14
*claps* Bravo! You saved the fic! Hehe...I think I can work on it now. I'm surprised that I hadn't thought of something like that, but then, it needed to be told from Ed's POV anyway, so it was just as well. Now I can actually take things slowly and make them work, hehe. Thanks. That helps a lot.

And my muse be helpful? Pah! I don't know what you're talking about, he's NEVER helpful! LOL! He's much more interested in scaring your muse than in being helpful. *snickers*

Anyway, I'll try to write something soon. How far away "soon" is, I don't know, since I'll be quite busy these next few weeks, but I'll try, hehe. Until then, take care, and have a nice day!

Melissa
SakuraSagura
2008-02-27 . chapter 7
Very, very, very cool. That chapter really hooked me, even if it felt a little bit rushed, though only at the very end.
SakuraSagura
2008-02-27 . chapter 6
Oo Al's a faerie?! I had no idea!
Anyways, awesome chapter. You revealed a lot of stuff, which was nice, and introduced some new questions too. Hm, I have an idea as to who Al saw in the forest... Guess I'll have to keep reading to see if I'm right or not.
the e t e r n a l -STORY
2008-02-22 . chapter 13
Oh, Edo-san's a fairy. OwO
Phantom SunsSong
2008-02-22 . chapter 13
It was worth the wait. ^^ Uh oh, looks like Ed's turning into a Fay! But is that necessarily a bad thing? A still wanna know why, though.

For some reason, when Ed noticed that his automail had turned into a regular arm, I thought of Winry, and what she would say.

"Okay, you've got your arm back, now gimme back my automail."

"Er, I can't."

"What do you mean you can't?! Ed, what did you do!" -falls over laughing- Okay, enough randomness for now. Great chapter, I can't wait to see more!
agent000
2008-02-21 . chapter 13
Lol, when you said you rushed through it, taking a page from my book, you weren't kidding! LOL! I didn't think we were going to do this particular thing for a few chapters, lol. *rolls eyes* Oh well, hehe, so he'll have to deal with the trauma now instead of later. *snickers* Interesting how you had his arm suddenly be restored though. At least that got the automail off of him, heh. Now both brothers are restored...sorta, lol. Funny though, you like to make all faeries green, don't you? *snickers*

Anyway, I'll try to update this soon. Thanks for finally updating! w00t! hehe
blue-soljah
2008-02-21 . chapter 13
wow! He has wings lol
SakuraSagura
2008-02-10 . chapter 5
I almost cried when I read this chapter... Ed and Al got into a fight, Ed was confronted with a dryad, and Al's just been kidnapped.What's going to happen now? Must. Read. Next. Chapter.
SakuraSagura
2008-02-10 . chapter 4
ROFL! Nice use of Wrenchy, made me laugh.
Poor Al, I hope he'll figure out everything soon. I feel bad for him T_T I'm curious as to what Al's real name is. Good chapter, ended way too soon though.
SakuraSagura
2008-02-06 . chapter 3
Le gasp is right, Al's going to be nothing but blisters if he keeps on touching metal. Sigh. I guess the story isn't going to be placed in Rush Valley, huh? Oh well... Time to go read chapter four, yay!
SakuraSagura
2008-02-06 . chapter 2
Ooh, very interesting... Tiny little flower women and more stinging metal? Either something's up or Al's even crazier than I originally thought. By the way, I love the way both of you write. Awesome job!
SakuraSagura
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
XD That was amazing! They're all so in character and you've got me itching to dive into chapter two already. Hmm, and did Al's hand hurt because the pot was hot or did the metal sting him? Wow. I think I might just have to fav this story...
Phantom SunsSong
2008-02-03 . chapter 12
Um... What the heck? Ed's floating? That can't be good...

Still, good chapter. The whole part with the water spirit was interesting, as well as explaining how the Fay could fall under different elements. Though the explanation of time differences kinda made my head hurt...

Still, I wonder what Al is going to do. Will he stay with the Fay? I guess so, since Ed's stuck there. But does the force that keeps him in the world of the Fay wear off evetually, or will he have to stay there forever? I dunno, you guys probably do, but I don't really expect an answer. In any case, keep up the awesome work! I love this story. ^^
XxHouranxX
2008-02-03 . chapter 12
Now...Ed's floating and glowing...? Is he sick with a fay disease or something? 0_o

How do you both come up with all these plot twists!?
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