oh my god that was good! better than MY idea.

e.e I feel so accomplished right now. I just read your story for about a day. Half of yesterday and ever since I woke up today 8D
But I must say that I love you for writing this story. There really aren't many people who finish their stories and just abandon them.
And to know that there is a sequel is killing me with excitement >w< Ah I just can't wait.

i loved this story, looking forward to the sequel. its too bad more good authors like you dont write about dothack

So you went with one more chapter. Something to hold us over until the next story gets under way, huh?

Interesting poem and... cliffhanger...

hello ryouga-san

First of all i'm really sorry for not leaving a review until now yesterday i was out of my home all day shopping for the last things i needed for my vacations so i'm sorry...

this chapter (despite you have mention it on the previous chapter)i count it as a epilogue...

what can i say you did really gave them a happy ending though i can't help to think this chapter was a little short(not counting the glossary for obvious reasons)nevertheless was very enjoyable it's almost to sad that after such as good ending you're making them get in another round of troubles (key word ''almost'' i can't wait for the sequel)

by the way seems like persona 3 did gave you lots of ideas for this story yeah! Persona rocks!...oh and now i respect you even more you saw clannad and you survive oh boy that's really something...

ok i wished you the best for the sequel from puerto vallarta hidro's out...

E! A surprise chapter! Yay! I liked it a lot. It's a little sad that someone's planning trouble in the shadow of the light of the victory against Morganna, Cubia, and AIDA, but somehow...nothing new. Poor Natsume, she's lost all her memories.

Now I'm getting excited for the sequel.

I'll see you then, whenever that might be.

Nice ending. Nice teaser.

Ahh...Hey, what does the word "uroboros" mean?

This is very interesting, I have a feeling that I shouldn't hold my breath for the sequel, you'll likely focus on your other projects beforehand. Pity about Natsume, could not have been a nameless char? and I don't even like her.
About the woman in Germany, the one whose name isn't mentioned, well, my bets are on Lara Hoerwick. (is the last name right?)
I say this because you seeminly added elements of all dothack related. And the girl that was in the game as Saya would be a novel element.
Well, looking forwards to the sequel. I definitely will be reading it. The preview is quite promising.

Creative, captivating, and magnificent! That is all I can say...

4 out 5 stars... 1- star because I had to skip over the HaseoElkAIDS parts. I don't even like the bouncing boob warrior princess. Much less the pairing itself. >_>

Ooh, this is the 2nd fic I've ever read in life and I like it for real! Real lot. You know, I think you got some talents to be a great novelist. I'm also amazed with your knowledge about dothack. Keep up the good work!

Can't wait the sequel. I'm a haseo x alkaid shipper, and I wanna see what they'll be doing next! And about the woman in germany... Was that you? Hahaha. Some original character for the sequel will be nice.

What a great story. I truly enjoyed reading it, so thanks for writing it... and finishing it (there are to many abandond stories out there).

I'll be looking forward to your next stroy.

Awesome ending!! Poor Natsume she missed out on everything. I hope she can make up for that in the sequel! I was really surprised when you decided to make a sequel. Good luck on the next story! I'll definitely be reading that!
-Celestia of the Moon
formly known as Angelic Celina

Ah! Great ending to a great story! I liked ending e-mail and how it models the special e-mail you receive after completing the game..

Can't wait for your sequel, the preview is interesting. Skeith not answering Haseo's call...a group of people vying for godhood. Can't wait!

Thirty chapters...awesome. Congratulations on finishing! Must be a relief.

Yes I want to create a save clear file! Good chapter. Heck great story.