That was really good I have always felt bad for Marcus because he lost his mate. But I like how he is able to understand their relationship , unimaginable

Great story! This int top 10 favorite one-shots on fanfiction just so you know. Awesome work! I absolutely love this!

this was amazing!

unimaginably good

great story...great ideas...:D

Wonderful! I am fascinated by Marcus... sighs... but he doesn't speak to me, so.. can't write about him yet.

That was amazing! I loved Marcus' POV!

The last line, I think you blunted the effect a bit by saying "it was so hard to imagine" and then ending with "Unimaginable". A different expression may have been better.

Really good writing. :)

i think this is a really original concept, and really well written. well done!

That was fantasic! Very interesting, too. I liked seeing this through Marcus' POV.

This makes me want to go and reread the ending of New Moon again, also. Hah.

New to the site. Just putzing around, reading stories here and there. Yours caught my eye, so I read it. Impressive. I truly enjoyed it. Thank you.

I always wondered hat Stephenie Meyer meant about Marcus's observation but I'm glad to know what you think went on.

This is splendid. Splendid. Who uses that word? ME! I need nice words. But this is fantastic. They don't have very much on Marcus's personality. That makes it very difficult to get in his head. I just think you you deserve props.

PROPS

WOW

that was so amazingky awesome

I think you captured him perfectly.

BRAVO

-claps enthusiastically-