I loved this. :)
We just read the book in English, and when I read the part about Atticus and Jack kissing on the cheek, my mind went instantly to "OMG slash!" XD
It's good to know I wasn't the only one who thought that. I just wish there were more stories for them.

Hmm. This was an interesting story and what I'm about to write isn't a hate comment just my opinion on the story in general. I have no problem with SLASH stories for some people do enjoy reading and writing them and that is to everyones own preference. All in all I'm sickened by this story. If one really admired the story, 'To Kill a Mockingbird' and admired how admirable a person Atticus was it would be evident he would never advance on his children in such a vulgar manner.

He loves his children deeply by showing them the right and fair way to live. And so what if Jack kissed his brother on the cheek? Every family has their own way of greeting one another but Atticus's Finch personality doesn't match up with the story at hand- even though you are an excellent writer and I believe you could go deeper with other creations. Atticus is still looked up to in society today and many people look to him for strength and inspiration to be a better person.

And I will not deny that in reality incest was around in the 30's, hundreds of years before and still to this day. The style you write is excellent but the content in this story was a thumbs down on my part and for how much of a hero Atticus truly is.

Wow, this was one heck of a story. I dearly love the book and I think that you put an...interesting twist on it. -winks- I hope that you continue to write stories, as you are a very good writer (in my opinion). :]

i'd have to say i'd think everyone would be a little more disturbed by the events...
but nevertheless...
good job.

haha! We are reading this in school, and that was the first thing i thought when Jack kissed Aticus on the cheek! yay for insest, and slashy goodness!

Well, I must say that I am pretty blown away by this! I mean, what I am trying to say is that I am so HAPPY that someone even noticed slash between Atticus and Jack. Bravo! Good Job. Although I am quite surprised when Atticus decided to take charge. Heh, unlikely of him, isn't it?

Great story!