Wow, great one-shot. I haven't read many ss/hg, but I really love this one. I laughed when Snape mentioned Dumbledore pushing him below the mistletoe. Heh, heh, that even sounds like our old Dumbles. Snape's snark was there, that's for sure.

But (because I always have to say something else) the ending felt a bit sudden or unfitting to me. I just felt like it could have been tied up a bit better. I guess, though, that your ending did make things a bit more realistic in terms of what might happen in our world.

Oh, and I was reading your profile. I completely agree with you about the fact that there are countless people on this site who have trouble with grammar/spelling. I'm really upset that people are flaming them, and I'm relieved to know that someone like you is offering his/her's service.

Nice one-shot :)

Sali

That was an interesting take on Hermione/Snape pairings. It's sad that she didn't get the reaction from him that she wanted and that he died of liver poisoning. Overall a good story.

Don't be so ** yourself!! It wasn't that bad! I actually enjoyed it! I've recently gotten into Hermione and Snape, and I found this scene satisfying. I loled when Snape was talking about Trelawney!! I liked when Snape said, “I am headed wherever I care to be headed,” What an @sshole! Perfect.

Sad, but like you said real life.Good work, though.

Plangent.

Well...she was one of the three people who walked away to let him die without lifting a finger. Dittany? I'm amazed he stayed in Wizarding Britain at all. No wonder he was at a Muggle pub, he probably still got stones chucked at him in Diagon Alley.

You'll not Hermione didn't bother to check on him after this encounter, either. The meeting meant even less to her than it probably did to Snape.