SINCERELY ENJOYED THIS STORY TO THIS POINT. AMAZING ENOUNGH IT IS CLOSE TO BREAKING DAWN. GOOD WORK AND AM READING OTHERS OF YOUR WRITING.

Wow

I really like this story from this POV it is more how Twilight should have gone if it weren't kept pg13 I like it and can't wait for more and I like how you are letting Bella and Jasper have a close relationship it is cool

Sad that poor Bella is having such a hard time with the blood lust. :-(

I was just thinking thank goodness that no one is beating themselves up, when Bella goes OTT!

Glad though that Bella seems to calm down with Emmett and Jasper's help. ;D

Thank for not makng Bella's change turn into a blood feast or major drama with Edward beating himself up.

Love it that again the kinder side of Rose comes through.

wow tastefully done.

Wonderful. Tasteful. Loving. Passionate. :D

Wow. Beautiful chapter. Loved that Jasper, Emmett, Carlisle and Esme gave Bella a charm that represented all of their love and acceptance.

Rose was so sweet and its nice that for once she is not an out and out **.

OMG The good bye to Charlie almost ripped my heart out. I am sitting here crying like a baby! SO touching. Good work. I look forward to more chapters.

i love it i love it i love it!

I have really enjoyed this story.. I now see that she actually needed to go through most of the newborn stuff to gain some insights and it has brought the family even closer together..I cant wait till when you start the story up again until then I will keep tabs on it and wait.. Thanks for such a wonderful story..

I hope she gets better control I liked it in the books where she had control...

I am really worried about the wolf pack but I have faith that the Cullens can take them down..

Well was it her hymin ( I think that is how you spell it) Anyways it was a great chapter I cant wait to read more...