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Reviews for:
Thin Red Line
tomorrow4eva
2008-09-22 . chapter 1
I think you've got TFA Ratchet's character down very well. And it turns out he was right to worry...
Are you still writing "Running the Gauntlet"?
Bluebird Soaring
2007-12-30 . chapter 1
Great job with the new setting/personalities! I can certainly see Ratchet sitting up worried about what happens next...esp since nobody gets rid of Screamer that easily =)
Jason M. Lee
2007-12-29 . chapter 1
Perfect title, senpai. Fits what Ratchet's feeling. They're not dead until you can confirm a body, and even then it's not always one hundred percent.
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