pretty good (:
you ought to write more indy/marion fics!

Very good! I liked how you worked the song into the story, rather than just posting the lyrics and story without combining them; very clever.

I liked the time setting; and you kept them very in character. I hope to read more of your work.

Why aren't people reviewing this? I love it! I've read it several times, but I was too lazy to review. Sorry. Keep up the good work.

Temi