 IrisWriter 2008-06-30 . chapter 4YAYS!
more please!
i am enjoying this!
i really like the fact that snape is a real prick, but you understand they had a friendship, not many establish a good friendship...
NOW MORE JAMES/LILY!
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 kierne333 2008-02-20 . chapter 4So, Michael, huh? Different.
That Mildred is so funny. I love her a lot. She seems like someone I would be friends with.
ISN'T EUGENIE ONE OF SARAH FERGUSON'S KIDS? LOLZ. |
 Bottlecapgurl 2008-02-20 . chapter 4EVITA! I love Madonna! But I know they weren't talking about her. LILY & JAMES 4EVRA!
Great chapter, btw. |
 kierne333 2008-02-20 . chapter 3UGH.
I love the way you write Snape and Lily together. They would be so meant for each other, if only Snape wasn't a Death Eater and Lily wasn't a bitch. :/ |
 Bottlecapgurl 2008-02-20 . chapter 3Dunno if I want Lily with Snape or not. You know...she *is* destined to be like James. :] |
 kierne333 2008-02-20 . chapter 2WOW.
I really kinda LOVVED the part where Snape grabs Lily's arm and they hold hands. Snape was sorta hot just then. Who knew Snape had it in him . . . cuz I didn't.
Great job. |
 Bottlecapgurl 2008-02-20 . chapter 2Damn, Lily's dad sounds like a B-I-0-T-C-H! But whatev, Rosier seems sort of hot... if he wasn't so mean. *reads next chapter* |
 Bottlecapgurl 2008-02-20 . chapter 1WOW! I can't get over the descriptions! Poor Snape makes me really sad, though...SIRIUSLY. LOL I hope Mildred gets with Sirius. They seem like they would be good together. |
 kierne333 2008-02-20 . chapter 1So oh my god. I love Lily's feelngs about her mother. It's very heartbreaking.
The egging scene was hilarious. Eileen's reaction was priceless.
I love it. A lot. |
 Eunike 2008-01-09 . chapter 3Diggin' it so far. I like your version of Lily; she seems very realistic and flawed enough to have a certain depth to her, instead of being too saintly (as she's often portraited as). I also like the emotionally challenging situation you've gotten her into. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
 pinecone.girl 2008-01-06 . chapter 3:):):) oh i like it a lot. :) nothing much else to say, so i'll leave you with this painfully short review. |
 anonynony 2007-12-31 . chapter 2 That was really good. Hope to read more soon. Mildred is delightfully harsh. What's her family like? Purebloods? It seems as though she could carry her own with the death eaters. |
 juut Telcontar 2007-12-30 . chapter 1 Oh now you've got us poor readers wondering where our beloved greasy git is.
I realy like this chapter, though the swearing seemed a bit out of character for Severus. I'd love to know how this story is going to continue, it's on my 'check every day' list. :)
juut. |