Hot, hot, HOT!
Damn if only my first kiss had been like that! I don't think I would have ever let my first kisser go then, LOL.
There was passion, need, desire, lust, necessity, ...
I think this is the best kiss I have ever read about!
Sorry it cost you your girlfriend although I wonder why anyone would dump someone for writing this. Unless of course you acted it out with another guy in front of her, LOL.
Kisses and hugs
Gillie

:hug:

I like it. It's sexy. Yet... not.