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| Ratdogtwo 2008-08-13 ch 19,  | abusegreat chapter keep up the good work |
| Mirai-Vegeto 2008-08-11 ch 18, | abuseOkay... there are a lot of grammer problems. But otherwise this is a really great story! But FYI, Bruce is twice as old as Dick, and so is Selena. So I don't see how those two could end up together? And one more thing, Bruce was Dick's adoptive father, so that makes him Elena's adoptive great-grandfather... and since Terry is Bruce's son, that makes him Elena's uncle... wierd. But anyway, I really like how you developed Elena's character. Hope you update soon. |
| Ratdogtwo 2008-07-29 ch 18, | abuseGREAT CHAPTER KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK |
| Ratdogtwo 2008-07-20 ch 17, | abusegreat chapter keep up the great work |
| sarah 2008-07-19 ch 16, anon. | abusesing it with me *AWESOME!* |
| Ratdogtwo 2008-07-12 ch 16, | abuseaww so the cat out of the bag finally. lol great chapter kep up the good work. |
| Ratdogtwo 2008-06-18 ch 15, | abuseintersting chapter. keep up the good work |
| Edoz88 2008-06-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou changed the p.o.v. in the firast couple of sentences. its very confusing and takes away from story. it has to be 'i' or 'she'not both in a span of three sentences. |
| Ratdogtwo 2008-05-01 ch 14, | abuselo0l. great chapter keep up the good work. |
| Ratdogtwo 2008-04-21 ch 13, | abuseHum getting very intersting keep up the good work |
| Chuck 2008-04-02 ch 12, anon. | abuseI just wanted to point out that there are grammar errors in this chapter. You might want to go back and edit the story. |
| Ratdogtwo 2008-04-01 ch 12, | abuseGreat chapter keep up the good work |
| Ratdogtwo 2008-03-23 ch 11, | abusepoor terry. great chapter keep up the good work |
| Ratdogtwo 2008-03-19 ch 10, | abuseReally good keep up the great work |
| Ratdogtwo 2008-03-10 ch 9, | abuseEepp. great hapter and keep up the good work. |