3 words. YOU.ARE.AWESOME!!

Very sweet - I especially like the sentence you used to conclude and how the reader (if they're anything like me) had no idea that they were in a clandestine relationship at the beginning of the fic. Great job!

I'd say this isn't/wasn't pointless. xD I liked it. Not much else to say... so yeah. I'll stop it here.

Gah... right now, with me, it is a hand meet forehead situation, or perhaps head meet wall... or table. Even though your fic had the utmost awesomeness, I really wish you'd write a lemon with this, that would be so satisfactory for me... oh gee, the hawt, *fleshy* images...

BTW, awesome job. X3

That was a story. You had atmosphere and tension and great tone. You could take this and really expand on it. You left so much room to work with. It was steamy although you teased me with the lemonlessness. You're writing is solid. It felt like a book. I'm a romantic suspense junkie and that could so be a chapter from any one of my favorites.

It's great O_O
you're a genious *bows*
they are so different but still totally Neji and TenTen, great work. And very inspiring.

Fabulous! I love it!!

XOXO

awesome! it felt like I was reading a romance novel in just what? 20 or so words?! goodness. i love the line "bathedin the euphoria of their afterglow..." you have a knack with words! super super love it! an enigma huh? so she is. haha.

Cute. Definitely a beginning stage of their relationship. They seem to be a little OOC though.

wow

this is a very well written story!

Nice one-shot. Great flow and in-character (and sexy xD). I loved your AU characterization of Tenten, I had always imagined her like that, pretty carefree in nature but keeps everything to herself.

Good job.

That was a really awsome oneshot

that...was ...REALLY ...good!

I really like this storyy.
You did a great job at writing it.
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