looks good so far.. cant wait for more.

Good one!

Great one really good. Anger well it wouldn't be Sasuke perhaps Karin

swet u update =D

Wow, a definite sequel is needed! This was the first naruto story I've read at this site. Thanks so much for being an awesome writer!

love it and when will u do the sequel

This story is good. Really, really good.
Plz continue it! plz plz please!
- okay end of whinning like a baby

Wow. That was interesting. Good thing i read the manga before your story. I else I would of be extremely ticked off i stupidly read what sort of happened next. heh. But Sasuke seemed a bit too changing too fast. Eh it seemed out of his character. But still the plot is interesting. Do continue!

Strawberrylover

Yeah good at first. but then became ooc.

also kinda like you rushed it.

oh that was so good!

Yes, I too hope that the manga will play out like this... wah, Itakun, how could you die!

That's it? It seems to be unfinished. As if there should be more to it. It makes no sense. It started off good until the end. So confusing.



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