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| AlGiardino 2008-06-19 ch 8, | abusegreat story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| danireed 2008-05-17 ch 8, | abusei really like what you have done so far. |
| daileyt 2008-05-12 ch 4, | abuseGreat story. |
| laura-az 2008-05-12 ch 8, | abuseWow! good thing I have your fics to let me get throught the night! I just came home from work, and I saw the FFN email =D, I couldn't help myself, I had to read it! I just LOVE your writing! I really like how you write about parker, I really love the kid too. =D btw, fantastic chapter! Update soon! |
| HawkAngel XD 2008-05-11 ch 8, | abuseoh yeah, Bones is hell more strong that anyone... good chap... update soon please HawkAngel |
| canadianagurl 2008-05-11 ch 8, | abuseLOL! Bren still thinks she can't take care of kids. Love the chapter! |
| bkworm 2008-05-11 ch 8, | abuseI was so happy to see an update of this story. Its such a sweet yet raw story with the interaction between the two of them. update soon! |
| GorgeousGummyBear 2008-05-11 ch 8, | abuseaw poor booth! this chapter was amazing |
| Missy Scully 2008-05-11 ch 8, | abuseloved it, can't wait to read more, please update soon. |
| allymcnally 2008-05-11 ch 8, | abuse“Bones,” Booth caught what she said. “I’m not going to hurt you again. You aren’t safe with me.” Shouldn't that be "am going to hurt you", or "you are safe with me"? |
| MoonlightGardenias 2008-05-11 ch 8, | abuseI'm so glad to see this fic was updated. Booth's sort of being tormented right now, and it seems just like him to go out and try to blow off some steam. His father is being really understanding, which is maybe what Booth needs at the moment. The only thing that I can think of, which I'm sure you're planning anyway, is to give Booth and Brennan a chance to talk. She's taking care of Parker for the time being (which I love, by the way, 'cause Parker/Brennan is just so cute.)...Maybe something like he's trying to avoid the topic, and she sort of forces him to look at her before telling him she understands? Not that it would help much, because Booth's got to face his demons on his own. Anyway, I liked the update, and hope to read more soon! |
| Dancing Phalanges 2008-05-08 ch 7, | abuseOMG yet again the third one I have read and loved. PLEASE WRITE MORE! |
| mes5 2008-03-18 ch 7, | abuseplease keep updating its a great story |
| iamwriter 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuse2 hours of sleep and you write a brillant piece, cant wait to see what happens when you get more sleep! |
| allymcnally 2008-03-09 ch 7, | abuseWould be nice if Brennan didn't magically have a spare set of his clothes at her place and that they didn't have sex at the beginning, but minus a few typos, it is interesting. |