Oh, please, please continue this story. These three are my favorite characters from the franchise and to see a story focusing on their interactions (not to mention an story that sticks this close to cannon) is a wonderful, refreshing novelty. I love your reasoning behind the blindfold, and find Axel's jealousy both adorable and heart-wrenching. Poor Roxas and Riku, both realizing that SOMETHING is going on but not sure what...

Again, I really love this - great quality writing with an interesting story. I hope you decide to keep writing it.

~YnK~

Great story, though I'm a bit worried about how long it's been since you updated. *shrugs* I guess I'll just put it in my favorites and hope for the best. :)

My friend sent this to me. I wasn't sure about it though because of the pairing. But it caught me. It made sense of how I feel about Fairytales (and Kingdom Hearts) in general. It's a little unfair about how things ended in the game. I love Axel's voice in this. It's totally him. I'm going to read more!

I have never read a fic so perfectly in canon before, and especially with such difficult characters in such a different situation.
I hope you update soon, as it seems it's been several months since your last.
Your writing is wonderful and I can't wait to read more. :>
Keep it up!

Very well written. This also sort of breeches the subjets that noone else will write about. It's easier to fabricate happy endings. Looking forward to an update.

I love reading all the different portrayals of the creepy system of Organization XI, and yours is so original, yet believeable! I love it! This fic could practically be in the game- except it delves way more into the characters' feelings and relationships than the game does, which is wonderful!

Your writing is so... clean, for lack of a better word. It allows the reader to fully digest the story and understand without confusion what the characters are going through. Awesome job!

luving this story. serious.

This is absolutley 110% amazing. I think that it has to be one of the best things I've ever read. It's so awesome. I hope that you update, because I really want to keep reading.

I love how you write Axel and Roxas so differently. I'm wondering if you're going to have some from Riku's POV. And I think that Axel blindfolding Riku was really interesting, since no one ever knows where it comes from. (Can he see through it?)

Sorry if this review's too long...

Anywho, I love this story so much. Please update!

This is wonderful! You never really hear about the year Sora was asleep (although they are making a Roxas-centered game about the time frame).

I think the fact that Axel is getting jealous is adorable. Because, even if he says he isn't, he totally is.

I don't know if this is Roxas/Riku or whatever, but either way, I can't wait to find out how this develops. Their personalities are spot-on, as well. :)

Ah~!
This has got to be one of my favourite fics ever. And trust me, I've read a lot!
I don't find many canons anymore, so you get a bonus. I love when people can actually depict characters and the storyline correctly while adding on bits of their own creativity, making it unique. Maybe I play favorites too, but I love reading fics about Riku, haha. I actually don't see many about him.
You write really well, I'm serious. You're fabulous with first person, and here's practically no mistakes of any kind(I think the only things I saw were skipped spaces in between words, like 'Riku: now "hewas" a different kind of gray~' and whatnot). Plus, I love your plot here. It takes real skill to get people interested in a story everyone already knows the outcome too! And you've sure got me hooked. The sentences and words in themselves are enticing and suspenseful to me. I don't want this fic to end, but I'll always look forward to the next chapter. Always! Even though I'm pretty sure I have you on my Alerts, I check this story every day to see if you've updated it. And I read it again anyways. I never get tired of this story.
Overall, the characters are in-character, the storyline is relevant and believable, and you are a writing god. Goddess. Both!

this's really something to read and think about. i like how you say things through axel's point of view, those 'sea-salt ice cream tradition with sunset' 'riku, a man who complicated things' etc. oh man, even though there's no sora here, you still made it like he's there (through Roxas of course) how you give subtle hints of rikuxsora from time to time really made me squeal.

axel's thought made me laughed from time to time, i love it. roxas is lovely. riku still haven't say much, but i like how you portray him!

hope you finish this, i want more~!

i would love to see this story bloom. :3

Ah, so Axel gave Riku the blindfold. I like it. And Roxas is so cute! I love how he's thinking of Riku, even though he's an enemy. Like a little pet! ^_^ But, I wonder what Saix called Axel for! ... Mystery, mystery...

It still amazes me how you can turn a "canon" storyline into something interesting. ^_^

This is so addicting. I stumbled across it at midnight and read right through, even though I have to get up at 5 tomorrow I couldn't stop. It's just so well written, from the characters to the little details. A really lovely story, can't wait for more.

I think this story is AMAZING and I wuv it soo much! XD always looking forward for the update! :3