Well I guess there's not much chance you're planning on finishing this, but I do wish you would. It's really great! So interesting.

What you wrote is too true. It's always the prince and princess that have their happily ever after, but the means, the persons, the sacrifies that were through which it was gained are as good as never mentioned. And that is what makes every fairy tale and every sick cliché story so sad in my opinion.

Anywho, this story is really grate so far. Please keep writing. :)

Ah! I love the characterization! I want to read more! Your stories are always so addicting, I've been reading them all for the past week whenever I can, and I just can't help it... I don't even play video games anymore. What I do in my spare time is read your fanfiction. You're seriously so amazing. I love this. Goodnight Moon, especially. I now am afraid to look into my mirror. Crazy, huh? Anyways, I digress. You've got their personalities so perfectly written, it's like I'm in the character's head... I hope I get to read more!

You're right, canon stuff is way harder to write than other types of fanfiction. It's a creature I wouldn't attempt to master, so I salute you.

You write wonderful fanfiction. Roxas is very canon, but I'm a little less sold on Axel. I think he sounded better in the latter half of this chapter than the former half. Your use of diction for him was too casual, I think. But it's not that bad at all.

I look forward to the next part of this story :)

Still awesomely awesome. =D It's really nice when I decided to come back to this fandom and found a really great author like you. I'm trying to read your other fanfictions, too, by the way, but let me ramble about this on first? XD

First of all, your plot is amazingly intriguing. I loved it to bits, and the way you portray the characters are awesomely IC, too. I personally can't wait to read the next chapter. =D Though I had to admit it's a bit hard to see Riku in a weak state like that, but I'm really glad you didn't make him helpless, because Riku is everything but helpless. Keep up the great job! I will be waiting for the next installment. =]

Oh, and just out of curiosity, will this one be a bit RikuSora-ish and AxelRoxas-ish?X3

Regards,

-isumi'kivic' and Ilde-

I have to admit, I was a bit hesitant to read this fanfiction. But I was bored one day and decided, oh hell...I love 180 and SS, so why not?

And I have to say, I'm addicted. I *adore* Organization XI and Riku. Both of them together? Gah...I cannot wait for more! I love your writing style, and the plot for this! (And am I bad for loving the fact that Riku is hurt? D: I love hurt!characters way too much.)

-Mirror

I must admit I'm confused how did Xemnas not know? He is all knowing(or at least when we fought he was swear he was everywhere I even thought of moving *pout*) Will the next chapter be Riku's pov? And I have a feeling Axel is going on a mission to find Riku. Update when you can.

Oh, please, please continue this story. These three are my favorite characters from the franchise and to see a story focusing on their interactions (not to mention an story that sticks this close to cannon) is a wonderful, refreshing novelty. I love your reasoning behind the blindfold, and find Axel's jealousy both adorable and heart-wrenching. Poor Roxas and Riku, both realizing that SOMETHING is going on but not sure what...

Again, I really love this - great quality writing with an interesting story. I hope you decide to keep writing it.

~YnK~

Great story, though I'm a bit worried about how long it's been since you updated. *shrugs* I guess I'll just put it in my favorites and hope for the best. :)

My friend sent this to me. I wasn't sure about it though because of the pairing. But it caught me. It made sense of how I feel about Fairytales (and Kingdom Hearts) in general. It's a little unfair about how things ended in the game. I love Axel's voice in this. It's totally him. I'm going to read more!

I have never read a fic so perfectly in canon before, and especially with such difficult characters in such a different situation.

I hope you update soon, as it seems it's been several months since your last.

Your writing is wonderful and I can't wait to read more. :

Keep it up!

Very well written. This also sort of breeches the subjets that noone else will write about. It's easier to fabricate happy endings. Looking forward to an update.

I love reading all the different portrayals of the creepy system of Organization XI, and yours is so original, yet believeable! I love it! This fic could practically be in the game- except it delves way more into the characters' feelings and relationships than the game does, which is wonderful!

Your writing is so... clean, for lack of a better word. It allows the reader to fully digest the story and understand without confusion what the characters are going through. Awesome job!

luving this story. serious.

This is absolutley 110% amazing. I think that it has to be one of the best things I've ever read. It's so awesome. I hope that you update, because I really want to keep reading.

I love how you write Axel and Roxas so differently. I'm wondering if you're going to have some from Riku's POV. And I think that Axel blindfolding Riku was really interesting, since no one ever knows where it comes from. (Can he see through it?)

Sorry if this review's too long...

Anywho, I love this story so much. Please update!