Wonderful story! I especially like how Josh and Coraline helped with the case, and how everything was solved in the end. Great!

wow1 so what happened to coraline? i love the mcbeth moments. this was really good

Very good beginning.

AWESOME! please continue

Great ending. Loved it all. Well done.

Cat.

I liked that

Uh-oh! Let's just hope everything turns out okay. I have a sick feeling that either Josh or Coraline will screw things up. Please write more soon! This is really good...

can i have some more please :P :)

I know people will disagree but I liked the tenderness you had Mick show for Coraline. They obviously had something very special with each other. Even beyond the man/wife relationship..Coraline was Mick's sire. Which tied him to her in another way! I think it was true to the story that you showed how deeply he felt about her.

Nice almost ending to the story. Great writing. Hope you have a conclusion comming.

good chapter continue

It's really good.

i don't know what happened to chapter 7 but it seems like its not finished and there is nothing to comment on in that chapter the review box is missing...i would really like to read the end of that chapter...because i was enjoying it!

I am so sorry I didn't get to this story earlier. Very good. It actually made me feel sorry for Coraline. I enjoyed the way you nailed the characters. And I love the story idea. Let's hope the news about vampires doesn't make Buzz Wires news.

this was a sad chapter. continue