Awesome story,
i hope you write some more on this,
its just simply awesome.

Yeahh! This is great! I absolutely LOVE Toh! More please!

wow keep up the good work plz

Oh, that fight between Max and Paul was exciting. xD I can't believe what an a$$hole he was. Great chapter! :D

that was one kick-a** chapter. he deserved it. keep up the good work. update soon please.

Awsome chap,hope it is updated soon.

Woot! I liked it:)

A Glasgow grin is where you cut the sides of the mouth of someone and cause them pain to make them scream and thus widening the grin. Eventually they die.x3 It's nice and violent!

Love it,but it is so sad.They shold not be separated,then again it is good for a story to have twists.can not wait for the rest of it,and hope that it comes soon because I will definatly read it.

Did I already review on it?
Probably not...
-_-
Well.
I love this story.Almost too much.
Um...
Although the murder scene was a bit too tame for me. Needs more torture...Like a Glasgow Grin. >D

No, it's gonna be too sad if Toh just returns home and leaves Max behind. I hope you're working something out for them. ;)

This is almost too good. I cried in the end... Don't ever stop writing this!

LOVE the story!
Update soon!
Later

DEATH TO FRANK!

Please update, I hope Max will be able to Toh, that she loves him and confides to him how much she had denied her own feelings for him, since that almost dishonorable act by Frank.

aw yay! i hope he kills frank!