 WildCroconaw 11/20/11 . chapter 9poor gorsepaw. he didn't deserve to die by tigerstar's paws |
 Silkengrip 8/17/11 . chapter 9The shortest chapter so far, but the one I liked the most...o-o |
 WildCroconaw 7/19/11 . chapter 27that's beautiful. |
 WildCroconaw 8/28/09 . chapter 4Oh. So Whiteclaw loved Silverstream but he never that he never had a chance with her because she was in love with graystripe.
I would have expected her mother or uncle (okaheart-her father crookedstar was oakheart's brother) to lead her to starclan |
 WildCroconaw 8/27/09 . chapter 28Poor runningwind. he did not deserve to die by tigerclaw's paws |
 WildCroconaw 2/10/09 . chapter 8Poor, poor stonefur. I reread the darkest hour recently and i nearly cried when stonefur died |
 WildCroconaw 2/5/09 . chapter 16Sniff. that was so sad how feathertail sacrificed her own life to save Tawnypelt, Crowpaw, Stormfur, Squirelpaw, brambleclaw and all of the tribe of rushing water from sharptooth |
 WildCroconaw 12/16/08 . chapter 24I bawled like a newborn kit when i read about Cinderpelt's death in Twilight. I couldn't believe it the first time i read it!
That was amazing that StarClan let cinderpelt have a second chance to live and complete her dream of becoming a warrior |
 WildCroconaw 11/28/08 . chapter 6Wow. So Brindleface really loved Snowfall, who was her first true love but she ended up having kits with Whitestorm.
So Snowfall forgave her. nice ending |
 Hazelstar 6/5/08 . chapter 40Who were those cats? |
 WildCroconaw 4/17/08 . chapter 1That's s cool that Redtail was reunited with Fawnfeather, Sandstorm's mom and his mate in StarClan. |
 xXSmitten KittenXx 3/23/08 . chapter 40You've stopped updating this one! I'm sad! Ah, well. Request(s)! Will you do a songfic of Heaven by Bryan Adams for Bluestar when she sees Oakheart again? And one other thing. Will you please r&r my story? I really respect your opinion, and if there's something I should change, please tell me about it! Thank you!
Nichi |
 The Unheard Song 3/19/08 . chapter 40Who is Blame about? These are really great stories Keep it up!
Peaceoutyall,
Amberstar |
 pinkfuzzykittenz 3/18/08 . chapter 37AW! i really feel bad for Ashfur now poor guy. i loved reading about all of the different warriors cats and their stories! xD it's nice to hear about what they think) |
 RinFujisaki 3/11/08 . chapter 40Who is BLAME about? |